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By : Luciano
  • From ANON - Bunta-chan on April 27, 2006
    YESSSSS!!!!!!! An update!! Not just any update, but the most awesome one!

    I very much loved this chapter. So hot! So sweet! And to a sick girl who's on her period, this is right up there with chocolate and bed. Makes me happy. ^^

    I'm looking forward to the last chapter and the Neji Trilogy! Is the trilogy going to be related to this story at all? Cuz I would hate to see Sasuke and Naruto break up so Naruto and Neji are together... But you're the author, and I love your writing style so I'll prolly read it anyway. ^^

    Thanks for making my day better! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on April 27, 2006
    I almost forgot to review your story. wow, amazing. I don't know how you do it. Your smut/love making scenes are so well written. It makes me shivery just from reading it. Does it come naturally to you? I've never tried, but I'm just going to assume that I won't be able to write out any kinky scenes like the one's you've been portraying. The way you had Sasuke torture Naruto was priceless. Especially since you had them reveal their identities. It had me laughing for a while. And as for the last part, where Naruto was asking Sasuke how he learned to give head? The answer was hilarious. I can't wait to read your next and final chapter. Good luck with it.



    ~Redwitch05 ^.~
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 27, 2006
    I personally love Sasuke as a brazen wanton.Yup. Hardly anyone does him like that ,well for more than a few pasages or it goes on forever and ends with a kiss at chap27.Gag me with let down.I remain,faithfully yours,
    in readership,
    blisblop


    Go Sasuke.Oh damn that was short,I mean it was wasn't it?No complaints mind you.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 27, 2006
    NIN did a cover of get Down,Make Love?I guess those boys where years before their time or am I showing my age and no one knows Queen's version?Gulps.Can of worms,well It might feel good?!You gotta,if you can bare Uchihacest... you just gotta 'cause I think you are just that good.And I know my shit!Ummm,that didn't come out,I mean that didn't sound quite right,did it?You gotta,gotta,gotta ,gotta.Think about it.Ficcage please.And WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON WITH THIS SITE.Where is Marrage?Where is everything...I lost my Uchiha files,nearly,well over 100 fics,damn it!F'n worm got in.Excuse my english,please.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 27, 2006
    I had to stop at cha 3 and tell you that this is one tightly written,very intense scene.Just really smoothly done, from the dancing onward(I lurve Queen,they are one of my personal Cannon,R.I.P.Freddie sama),their reactions during the day are spot on too.Poor Iruka,I'd kill if anyone did that to me,which means of course I have done it to some one, but I digress.I am impressed and very happy to have had the chance to read this.Now,gotta read!
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  • From ANON - Karlita Shepard on April 26, 2006
    I seriously did not think I was going to be coming here after all that crap that this site's been through. But my friend posted up her first fanfiction last night and told me to read your story. WOW ^^ Me luvey. That's saying a lot. Considering that I don't even read much. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Naruto isn't that dense and knows that Sasuke is Aki

    *K*
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  • From ANON - W on April 26, 2006
    Yay! You have a new fan! It's kinda funny how Sasuke connects the dots... then kisses Naruto, who loves it. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Leluv on April 25, 2006
    This story is so awesome! I want to know what happens, so update soon!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on April 24, 2006
    Awesome chapter, I really enjoyed it. Kiba always is there to break the ice! Woot!

    I wonder what's wrong with Neji? It was hard to imagine him singing but it was also very very cool.

    So, Sasuke's dropping the hints and Naruto's slowly catching on. Wonder what's gonna happen on their little date! Update soon, alright?
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  • From ANON - Bunta-chan on April 24, 2006
    WOO HOO!!!

    DAAAAMN that was hot. Sasuke *cleans up pool of drool* he can dance and sing for me any time!

    I really love your story. It's so fun! I look forward to every update. This one did not disappoint at all. Though, I'm anxious to see what happens next!

    And Neji... poor guy. I would really like to see how you develop Neji's story. Is it going to take place in this story (no complaints here if it does!) or is it going to be a companion fic to this one (no complaints here either)?

    Well, I'm off to write more on my fic, I can hear my readers and reviewers cursing my name hoping I'd update. LOL

    Take care! Great update!
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on April 24, 2006
    You are so welcome ^^
    omg, just finished reading the fifth chapter. So cuuute =^-^= I can't wait for the next one. When Aki and Blue meet later... Sasuke might spot a blonde strand of hair, or they both might recognize their kiss.... *daydreams for a while* #please excuse me. I just like to let the author know what's going through my mind from time to time while reading their stories ^^# I've been reading so many angsty and Tragedy related stories that I seriously need something like this. I can't bear to read anything else that end w/ Sasuke being Killed or vice versa. Btw, every time they moaned in their little pleasurable states, I thought you'd may have one of the two (or both) unconciously gasp out the others' name. But it didn't happen. oh well.


    Have a Nice Day ^^





    ~Redwitch05 ^.~

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  • From ANON - Lease on April 24, 2006
    oh, hell yeah!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anna Belle on April 24, 2006
    this story is so awesome. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - SugaredGiraffe on April 24, 2006
    Wow! You have to update! Must read more!
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on April 23, 2006
    The title of your fanfic caught my attention a few hours ago. So, like the curious cat I am, I read your story. It is supremely addictive. The way you write keeps me focused all the way through. Btw, that song that you mentioned, "Get Down, make love", NINE INCH NAILS sing it. I just looked it up ^^
    I love how the dream came out. I seriously thought it was real up until it said Naruto jolts awake. I never even thought for a second that it was a dream, which really surprised me. I'm always the one that writes dreams out like that. Anyways, I love the way you worded out their love making. Would you call it love making ^-^*? I am convinced that Sasuke probably knows that Blue is Naruto. Hence the color of his eyes ^.^ okay, I'll stop my rambling. I enjoy your story so much. Can't wait for the next chapter. btw, ummm.... ok, I got a lil dramatical during the dream. Remember when I said that I thought it was real? yeah.... *looks away embarrasedly* I started crying when he pushed Naruto away from him and said that he never had him to begin with. T.T




    ~Redwitch05 ^.~
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