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Reviews for Kindred

By : Maldoror
  • From ANON - mimi a.k.a. mimis on July 03, 2006
    I was just reading over reviews and I saw another mimi....*laughing* so the last review (the oneresponding to 2 chapters was me and not the other mimi. I will now add an*s* to the end of my name to tell us apart! Can't wait till the next capter.
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  • From ANON - mimi on July 03, 2006
    I am so glad you updated. I didn't respond to the last chapter so I am kind of responding to both chapters now. I am very glad that Lee and Gaara decided to keep the kids. I wasn't really sure how you were going to handle that. I also enjoyed Gaara's typically upfront approach to telling Chiro that he and Lee were lovers and not roommates. I also loved Lee's reaction. He can be sooooo cute. I also like how you continually show how Gaara still struggles with his inner demon(s).I can't wait for the next chapter... and hopefully more Gaara and Lee lovin'.
    P.S I also looked around for other stories you have written i.e. Kakashi/Iruka etc. I enjoyed them all. You are a great writer and as someone who teaches students how to write it is a pleasure to read well written work.
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on July 03, 2006
    *rubs forehead* Alright, I came to this story after reading Diplomatic Relations.... I gotta say, I freaking hate the kids. I barf at the very idea of an OC. The kids are evened out pretty well in the character side of things...but...I dunno. I don't see a point in them being in the story. Seriously. I want them to die. And Gaara's already getting attached to them? It took Lee forever to have that happen with him. Yeah...just...yeah. I hate the kids.
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  • From ANON - melissa on June 27, 2006
    I love your work . Your storys were the first that I ever read of Lee Garra pairing . Please keep wriiting the story Kindred .I love it .

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  • From Trollmia on June 26, 2006
    This chapter caused my breathe to malefunction and then... Awwwww so cute... A perfect blend once again. The way you're describing things, it's just amazing. It pulls you in and make a you a part of the story. It's like going to the movies. You can really see what's happening. That's a gift.
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  • From ANON - DeviLived on June 25, 2006
    OOh, I really enjoyed that chapter, it was very well written.

    I love how you describe Gaara's emotions! They're always so realistic and beautifully written. I like how you included the title near the end, intentional or not it was still cool.

    I really love Gaara and Lee together, they totally balence each other out. I like how you make Lee be able to read Gaara so well, it shows how deep their releationship is. I'm currently trying to convince one of my friends that Gaara/Lee is a good thing :D. I'm going to get her to read Diplomatic Relations soon :D:D

    Anyways, don't let life get you down :D and don't feel as if you're obligated to update this! Writing should be an escape now a job!! :D:D:D:D:D

    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - mimi on June 21, 2006
    hey I am soooooo glad you updated. After reading the first two Kindred chapters (a couple of months ago)I went to your live journal and read Diplomatic Relations. It was sooo fantastic I stayed up till 2am to finish it!! ^-^. My eyes were sooo tired that day but it was soooo worth it. Since then I have been checking your live journal (weekly!)and reading your side stories(Chicken Soup et. al.) and now Anbu. You are such a great writer and I really enjoy how you write and express what the characters are thinking. Plus the smut is greaaat too!!! However, because of you Lee and Gaara are now my favorite pairing! I can't read any other pairing and enjoy it as well. *sigh* its o.k. I forgive you *nods seriously* One final note- I do not have an icon so I am not sure that my review on your live journal would post, so that is why.... I read there and respond here. If I can post on your journal it would be easier. Next time I will try.
    I can't wait for the next chapter and I am sorry to hear it is ending soon....*waits a few seconds* what other Lee-Garra stuff are you writing!?!?! - no pressure I swear....just kiddin.


















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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 19, 2006
    Loved it, awesome job.

    I was a bit 'WHOA' when we jumped from day 6 to day 24 but you warned us so it wasn't really a bad shock. I totally love the scenes with Gaara and the kids! They're always so...cute, cool, deep and so on. Awesome chapter, as per usual. I liked the ending when both Gaara and Lee started running at the same time :D hehe.

    Update soon, alright?

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  • From Trollmia on June 19, 2006
    ahhh, just comes in her to kiss you.... You know - you are a goddess of writing...
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  • From ANON - evol on June 05, 2006
    "we need this..."

    translation:

    "my reviewers need this"


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  • From ANON - mimi on June 04, 2006
    Wow...... I just loovved that sex scene, you made the wait for it worthwhile. Then *starts laughing* to go from that too a problem with Chiro *grin*. I like how you shift from one sexy scene to a lighter one. I can't wait for the next part!!!!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 03, 2006
    I loved Gaara's idea for the mini gourd.


    Awesome job, once again. Love this story, it's really good. Chiro really has some problems but I think Gaara's handling him well. The kid even almost looks up to him, for some reason. Mind you, Gaara's pretty cool. :D

    I can't wait till the next update! Next week you say? Well that just means I have to get through seven days of life before you update. YOSH!
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  • From Trollmia on June 03, 2006
    Ahhh, a little tiny gourd... how sweet. Gaara can be such a softie... At least in my thoughts he's a softie deep, deeeeeep, deeeeeeep down inside...
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  • From ANON - Lynx on June 03, 2006
    Waiii! The kids are so cute- poor Lee, though. :)
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  • From ANON - fan on June 02, 2006
    You know... I absolutely loved diplomatic relations. When you first started Kindred, though, I just couldn't see myself getting into it, so I sort of ignored it for a while... and now I'm ashamed. Because I really think that the way you go in depth with the characters- especially with it being from Gaara's viewpoint now more than Lee's- is absolutely beautiful, and the perfect continuation of the original story line. I'm really enjoying this one, keep up the good work!!! And if you need any plot bunnies, email me. I've got some ideas. :)
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