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Reviews for The Corruption of Konoha

By : Vortex
  • From scarletwitchextreme on June 10, 2009
    this was avery good story to bad you never finished it, as the storyline is so interesting and the last chapter had me on edge. Love the pairing.
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  • From DewiSri on May 23, 2009
    When are you going to update again?
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 15, 2006
    Very provocative,I like it alot.The dreamy victim is a powerful architype(though not entirely Jungian but he was a man so allowences must be made).Itachi is insidious,peeling her like an onion indeed.I am looking forward to the sexually liberated Sakura even though she sprung a dreamy victim...but thats how it goes in real life too eh?Nice work.
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  • From ANON - OnlineGirl on September 14, 2006
    YAY^_____________________^..now just update again!!^_^
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  • From ANON - tsukashi (NSI) on September 13, 2006
    Heya Vortex! Long time no talk, muahahaha! I'm looking forward to reading more soon! I can't wait to see Itachi again too!
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  • From ANON - OnlineGirl on August 25, 2006
    Ohhhhhh update and email me when you do^^
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  • From ANON - Kenji on July 20, 2006
    An awesome story. Not everyday you find a good Itachi x Sakura fic. Please, PLEAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEE,,,
    continue.
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  • From ANON - krickitat (NSI) on July 06, 2006
    YO!
    well i finally read your little fic and i have to say i really like it.
    although about the tsukiyomi i dont believe its a way to READ minds like they said earlier in the series all they are doing is hypnotizing and making educated guesses most of the time.

    id like to see him use the mangekyo to mutiply both him and her and force her to have the sensation of sex with more then one consciousness....that would be cool.


    happy writing
    krickitat
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  • From ANON - darkmiko90 on June 24, 2006
    Very well written to say the least. I adore Itachi x Sakura and I just pray you update soon. Know what the best part is though? You actually know how to spell, and I spotted no grammatical errors whatsoever (which is definitely a plus). All in all I give you a 5/5!
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  • From ANON - tsukashi on April 20, 2006
    Is the second chapter in tsukiyomi too? Don't tell, I wanna wait to find out, I am just wondering out loud! hehe. Damn! The second chapter is hoTT too! I can't wait to read more. It is not just the smut that is good (while you write it well), it is the fact that there are not a lot of errors to detract from the story, and the maturity that shows in your writing. This story is not like so many Ita/Saku out there where Itachi rapes Sakura to get at Sasuke, etc. You have gotten into Itachi's mind here (while I don't think he is this much of a perv for real, I do like to imagine a pervy Itachi Muahahahaha!) meaning that you have thought this through, or at least the characters and who they are and how they react, and it shows in your writing. So keep up the good work! I look forward to more!

    Are you planning on introducing Saucy later in the story? I know that in the first chappie you said that Itachi was doing this to fuck with Saucy.
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  • From ANON - Arryelle on April 15, 2006
    I'm the one above sorry
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2006
    I hope you are going to continue you this and have a lemon between Itachi/Sakura that couple is great no one sees that but you did so yay
    Update please

    Arry
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  • From ANON - akasha on April 14, 2006
    i wonder what itachi will have in store for sakura next? can't wait to find out! update soon please!
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  • From ANON - tsukashi (NSI) on April 10, 2006
    Damn that was hot! Well written, in character, interesting from start to finish, all in all an awesome chapter! I have been wanting to write a scene where he uses his mangekyou sharningan on Sakura in this way, I'm glad that I finally found a story where he did! I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - blackbloodedkunoichi on April 09, 2006
    Ohhh I love this story! I hope you continue soon!!!!!!!! I'll be waiting ;)
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