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By : akashicrecord
  • From tootalltygerlily on November 26, 2006
    *blink blink*

    Your fic is one of the best so far that I have found of Kakashi/Sakura...I became so engrossed into the fic, that I literally lost nearly a whole day just sitting in front of the computer reading it. And my butt thoroughly agrees...stupid uncomfortable chair!

    I eagerly await the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kakasaku4ever on September 13, 2006
    I absolutely love this story. Please update soon! If you're busy with life, then take your time and update when you can. I'm just dying to know what's going to happen next. This is one of the few really good Kaka/Saku stories out there, and you had me hooked from the first chapter. Damn, since you added Itachi to the mix, I can't figure out where this story is going next which is a good thing. It keeps me at the edge of my seat. But please don't let Sakura be with Itachi in any sexual way, and I'll be one happy reader. Of course, it's your story and you can do what you want, but that's the only thing I don't want to see. I kind of would like to see Itachi be the one yearning to possess her, but can't have her. Now that would be good. Like have them rescue Sakura now, and then have Itachi pushing his real purpose of getting Naruto aside, so he could do anything to get her in his possession again. I think it would be interesting for once to see Itachi not get what wants just because he's an Uchiha (like I've seen in the few stories I've read w/him in it). Then of course, can't forget the all-out brawl between him and Kakashi for 'fair' Sakura's hand (with Kakashi being the winner obviously). Anyway, keep up the good work and update when you can.
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  • From ANON - cathy on August 05, 2006
    It's really nice to have a husband and wife team writing! I don't really think Itachi would be happy with anybody else's baby or even care about having kids since he killed his clan--but just forgetting that and going with the flow, it makes for some good romantic tension. It's nice to see Shino involved in a story. I'd think Kakashi would have women throwing themselves at him, and it would be realistic to have him having to turn some women away in Konoha to make clear to Sakura what a prize he is (if/when the story goes back to K.). I do like the idea of Kakashi getting possessive of his child--a person who has lost so much and who is so noble would want to protect his child from neglect. I loved the early chapters--very romantic! I enjoyed the Kakashi coming out of the shower scene.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2006
    sorry for the delay in reviewing. I've been busy with my own job and what-not. I can't believe you find the time to write with children! *bows* I bow to you oh awesome writer and mom. Keep up the good work. God I hope this all turns out ok. Although you are right Itachi is a sick fuck. Not the baby!! I hope it does have silver hair and pink highlights. (so cute!) Update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - BradenIsMyMonkey on July 25, 2006
    OMG! This is the coolest Naruto fic I have ever read. The other fics all have weird plots, but not this one. I really like how this is going...I am looking foward for another update!
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  • From ANON - Pkitty on July 21, 2006
    Great! Short but great non the less! I really hope for more soon. I believe this is the first story I've ever reviewed for on this site. ^__^
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  • From ANON - raefire on July 20, 2006
    This story is awesome, so many twists and turns!! LOVE IT
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  • From ANON - Jovianwoflgirl on July 20, 2006
    Ah, damn that weasel! If I were in there I would ring his neck! Now what Sakura going to do? Is she going to tell Kakashi what Itachi did? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on July 19, 2006
    O.o Ok well awsome chapter, short but sweet...well not really sweet, but very interesting. Well my best guess is that Itachi used his chakra to infuse his body singniture (don't know how to say this to make it make sense...sorry) Changing the fetus from Kakashi's to his child, that was why he called it his son, and also that it would change her child's and her life...because the child was now embued with Itachi's power...the power of the Uchiha clan the Sharingan...something that Kakashi couldn't give him...even though he does posses the eye it is not his but Obito's thus it wouldn't pass onto his offspring...but whatever Itachi did made it so that the child will have it. That or he killed the fetus and is planning on inplanting his own in her belly...but judging by how he said that there was still a life being protected in her belly then I guess that that's not the case. Wow...this review is really long, but I'm just going to contine it, I am very excited by this whole Itachi being obessed with Sakura... not in a I love you sort of way, but he is obessed in I must posses you sort of way... it is very interesting seeing as how he took her aas bait in the first place right? I liked how Itachi calmed her down before he started with his little plan, it was a sensual and very comforting scene... this is one of the other reasons that I'm not up in arms about him changing the child...he was at leaset gentle about it...

    Well thank you very much for updating, I really love this story and all the twists turns and actions you and your husband throw into it, I can't wait for the next update and see if I was anywhere near the mark on my guess. :D
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  • From ANON - Pkitty on July 18, 2006
    Very good! I hope for more soon.
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  • From ANON - CianaRui on July 18, 2006
    Geez, talk about ominous. Is Itachi changing the kid's dna or chakra signature to match his own? That would be cruel to both Kakashi and Sakura, but an interesting twist in the story. Gotta love Itachi though, twisted sicko. The relationships are growning and twisting into intricate and decieving patterns. I am interested to see where the story will go from here.
    Also, I must say I giggled profusely at Akamaru's attack-- how ironic that his special would be to use the guy as a hydrant. Snicker**
    Keep up the great work and post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Jovianwolfgirl on July 18, 2006
    Ah, NO! How could this happen? The kid is Kakashi not Itachi! AHHHH(Wave hands around wildly). I hope Sakura or someone notice the changes! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - ronsmyhero on July 18, 2006
    Oh man! I'm going to take a wild stab in the dark here, but... Did he mix his chakra with both the baby and Sakura in some way? Meaning the blood may not be his but the chakra in the baby is...you know, it's Kakashi's blood and looks but the chakra the baby will be using is Itachi's own. Or did he in some way with his chakra 'mentally brainwash the unborn kid...and slowly Sakura into either wanting him (itachi) or thinking him (again, itachi) to be the father? Gah! So many possiblities!! Great Story!
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  • From Daniella on July 17, 2006
    Oh, wow! Great story! I love it, please update soon! I got to know what going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - mel on July 16, 2006
    Wow! I love this story! Great action and a good plot to boot. Well done. Please update soon.
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