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Reviews for The Fragile

By : akashicrecord
  • From ANON - moodiful819 on July 09, 2006
    I love this fic. Plz continue!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ox King on July 06, 2006
    Great story. I'm glad I was able to stumble across this story. This is a great Kaka/Saku fic. Thanks for taking the time to write. New chapter soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - raeshi on July 05, 2006
    I just finished reading all 13 chapters. I really like the series. Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what Itachi will do with Sakura. Till next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2006
    Awesome stuff. I'm impressed and pleased as always. Update as soon as you get the chance!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on July 04, 2006
    Whoo another update! Wow I really thought you were going to kill Shino on me...and wow Hellbent...(right?) that was an awsome fight scene. it played to all of the character's strengths, and was very spell bounding, once again the action just drew me in. Great original character, and beliieveable jutsus, and overall just great chapter. I thank you both so much for writing a wonderfull story, and I can wait till the next update...oh you promise me Itachi and Sakura moments...(you can't see it but, I'm drooling over here.) :D. Well once again thanks for an awsome update.
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on July 01, 2006
    Wah a new devlopment! Itachi likes her! oh my how interesting...now I really love you! Hehe this is such a wonderful story, I really love the characterization, and I love how you have written Itachi's thoughts...they seen really true to character. I love the plot, and I love the way you and your husband write. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I really liked how he had written the previous time, and I can't wait for the big fight scene. Thank you so much for updating and I hope you do so again soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2006
    good so far, but I hope that baby stays alive. Hope the writing is going well, update as soon as you can.

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - ronsmyhero on July 01, 2006
    Gah! I love this story! I like the way that Kakashi finally came around to the idea of other people knowing about him and Sakura. I loved the whole pakkun saying "you don't have to ask"...so sweet. It's weird. After reading the last chapter, I, myself feel protective of that baby. Itachi I will break off your arms and beat you to death with them if you harm that friggen baby! sorry...Great flippin story! eagerly awaitng your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - C.R. on July 01, 2006
    OMG!!!!! Itachi is such a fractured, complex pervert-- I am intrigued. And the idea that he might be just a tinnny bit covetous (sp?) of Sakura for his own purposes [some of which he probably would never admit to in a 1,0000 years] makes it even better.
    Great work and I look forward to the next update. More Kakashix Sakura + Itachi, please.
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  • From ANON - Tomko-chan on June 06, 2006
    It looks really good and i can't wait until the next chapter^^
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  • From ANON - Blondie on June 03, 2006
    Poor Kakashi, having to worry about Sakura. Especially since she is pregnant with his child. I just hope that they reach her in time. Before Itachi does something to her.
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  • From ANON - Roxas on May 31, 2006
    Hmmm a trap. very intriging. (I know thats not spelled right oh well) Hopefully you dont plan on killing anybody, well besides Akatsuki of course lol. I have a question How exactly does Sakura feel about Kakashi up to this point? I mean we all know now that he realizes what he wants. But I don't really know where she stands as far as staying with him or not. I also feel kind of bad for Shino but I'd rather Kakashi have Sakura. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on May 30, 2006
    It's really good so far. Only one thing to mention, it keeps changing from past to present tense. That's the only thing that takes away from the chapter. Great work keep it up! I hope you update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on May 29, 2006
    Yea! An update. Very interesting, and well thought out, so the whole cave thing was just a plot? That was very well thought out, and also very interesting to read, alot of sences like that are hard to read and way too drawn out to be engaging for the reader, but this was very well written and very engaging. You and your husband are a very good team, this was excelent. Ah poor Shino...you should set him up with someone at the end, the poor guy he never catches a break. Well once again very good chapter, and thank you for updating, and I hope you can do so again soon, thanks.
    -Jenn
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  • From ANON - Roxas on May 25, 2006
    Excellent an update. You totally made my day when you updated your story. I had been reading it with a friend at their house when I first ran into so thats why this is my first review. I really like the way you have Kakashi thinking. I can only wonder at the moment what Itachi is actually going to do to Sakura but hopefully Kakashi can get there in time. I hope the writer's block skedaddles soon 'cause I wanna read more!
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