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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2008
    good story.well thought out.
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  • From VahnDeathHeart on March 06, 2008
    Hey I just wanted to congratualate on your story and how its turned out. I have been reading it for a while and its has help inspier me to write my own stories (fanfiction and real). I don't comment people often and when I have it has been just because they made a mistake, so this is my first official actual review.
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  • From xXkuronekoXx on March 06, 2008
    oooooo where are you going?
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  • From ANON - Ryu on February 29, 2008
    Great chapter.

    A little unexpected on some things, but still great.

    Sad to year it will take a while for the next update.

    But I have bookmarked your story ^^.

    Hopefully you will be able to post something sooner, but I can wait if it is necessary.

    Thank you for your good work.
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  • From serenagold on February 29, 2008
    Wow... seven months! I hope everything will be alright.


    Anyway, I'd just like to say this was another great chapter. I can't wait to find out what exactly going on and look forward to Naruto's return. This story just seems so epic. I fell like we're only just scratching the surface between the mysterious white chakara and the unknown new Akatsuke-like threat. Keep up the good work. (And don't worry.. those shakes and gitters are just normal when you're going through internet-withdrawal.)
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  • From ShouraiChan on February 29, 2008
    Yeah...so....um...how do I say this without trying to look like I'm off my rocker...? Hmmm...oh, fuck it.

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE I AM JUST GETTING AROUND TO READING IT! Oh, gosh, I looooooove it! YOU, oh-author-who-I-am-not-worthy-of, Pronounce us story and wife!

    Lol, j/k, j/k. I LOVE how you used the term 'Floored' a lot, it just makes me laugh because I say it like every other sentance and my friends are all like, "You're WHAT?" lol. So, yeah, this story is an AMAZING piece of work and I refuse just stack your work up against any other authors who have written a NaruTema fic, because this one just BLOWS them all away! By far!

    Notes: Kakashi is GREAT. He is too freaking funny and I just love him! Tsunade/Kakashi made a funny comedy duo that's for damn sure! Anyway, keep up the amazing work and I can't wait until your next update! Laters for now, you rock my scooby-doo sox! lol (I just needed an ending clencher, ignore me)

    Your fellow author/fan,

    ~Sho-Chan~
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 29, 2008
    Hey love the chap... But I am still trying to figure something out.. The white chakra what does it mean exactly.. I guess Kakashiand Iruka are a couple or very close friends... I hope you are safeand I will be waiting to read your story....


    Always Josh B.
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  • From ANON - Caterham_Se7en on February 25, 2008
    Doing good, doing good... I'm not much for fan fics but this one is like reading a book. Great stuff. I have commented before but I can;t remember the name I used... it was probably Caterham, Se7en, Paladin, or a mix of those... XP sorry.
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  • From ANON - Outcast87 on February 24, 2008
    Keep up the great work. I have been waiting for a bit now lol.
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  • From ANON - Thomas Krempetz on February 11, 2008
    Amazing story.

    One of the best plots i've read in awhile.

    Really looking forward to the next chapter

    Criticism: The kakashi plot->white chakra seems a little odd, but i guess it's because i dont know what the whole deal is
    Positive: I really enjoyed the duel with Iruka, the babysitting scene with sasukes kids, and the shopping scene with hinata. The little scenes showing how naruto is appreciated. Oh, and the part where he slams the ANBU's head into the wall kicked ass.

    Rock on man
    Any clue when the next chapter will be out?
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  • From ANON - Sonicron on January 31, 2008
    It's been a while since I delved into the fanfic realm. Originally I was just looking for a nice lemon or two, but this story intrigued me, and now I have to say it's so good I stayed up all night reading.
    Since I only just joined, I don't know how long you usually take to update, but I do hope you'll provide us with a new chapter soon. Your writing style is nice, and you know something about building up suspense. I'm at the edge of my chair asking myself a few questions: What's Kakashi's background? What's happening to Temari and her child.. and why does it appear to possess that white chakra? Will Kyuubi regain some of his control? .. and whatever happened to Neji to make him swear like that? :P
    Keep it up, you're doing great! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2008
    I didn't want to review until I read all of the chapters so far. AWESOME is the only word I can come up with!! And that too is an understatement!! This is just too good! Please hurry :) Naruto and Temari...I never would have figured, but it does make sense. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the updates...soon, PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - ande_ellis on January 19, 2008
    Thanks for updating so soon, I've been reading your story for longer than I care to tell and can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From serenagold on January 19, 2008
    Oh my gosh! Updates! (I love this story and actually haven't read it in a long while and had a bunch to catch up on. I'm so glad its updating, because its so incredibly well done.)


    The whole white chakara thing intrigues me. What could be its connection to Kakashi, if any at all. It could just be a sworn vengeance thing, maybe? Very exciting stuff. Naruto is going to flip when he gets back. Gaara's still flipped. What oh what could be hiding in Mist? And I'm thinking the Maternity nurses that come in on the next shift are going to know whats going on with Temari's pregnancy even before Tsunande, if only for the simple fact that they just make the uninformed assumption that she's pregnant and hook her up to a fetal monitor to check the status of her child. I kept cringing every time Temari kept pushing herself despite her body giving her subtle hints that its putting a strain on her belly/child. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Josh.B on January 18, 2008
    Hely Legilmyth.. Glad ur still writing after the pain.. I was thinking about the feeling Naruto had when he woke up from a sound sleep.. I know how that is cuz I've woken up out of the blue and it felt likesomebody was trying to reach me in a way.. So that was what Naruto felt when he woke I think.. Hope ur writer's block goes away and u can update ur stories love to hear from u when u get time
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