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By : Legilmyth

From ANON - riversan on August 23, 2010
So happy to come upon a few more chapters of this story!! I hope you have time to update, this is a very interesting plot (don't die, Kakashi... Naruto, come home!)
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From cletusdabomb85 on August 04, 2010
Interesting story, I'm curious to see how it turns out and would love to know when the next chapter is posted.
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From ANON - Zidiane on July 04, 2010
duuu~de! i was... can't believe i'm gonna say this, but i was "researching" how lemons are done. i need to write some but mine always come out not to my liking. anyway! i was researching, right up until i found your story. you bastard, you have kept me from researching for almost a week, you know that? your story is addicting, for no reason! anyway, i would like to ask you a favor, seeing as how you did an amazing job with this story (i'm only at chapter 19, btw), could you read my story, and tell me what you think? http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5951491/1/Team_Naruto, that's where it is. it's "Team Naruto", and i would like to know what you think of it. you, sir, are one of the few people i have felt a need to review. normally, it's like "cool story. next." but yours was different... i'm gonna stop there, cause if i continue, i'll just loop around with the same compliments over and over. but, yeah, could you tell me what you think of my story?
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From serenagold on July 03, 2010
Woo-hoo!!! Updates!!! :D

I�m so excited that Naruto is almost home!!! Although Kakashi is now in some serious shit. Holy crap. There�s all sorts a stuff happening right now and I�m not sure I want to wait the forever it will take until the next chapter!! (lol ~ well it seems like forever, anyway. ^^)

Keep up the great work!

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From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2010
Please don't tell me Kakashi dies! PLEASE...NO.........
Can't Naruto save him? Please
It was worth the wait for the update. I love this fic. I re-read it every time you have updated. I look forward to the next update!
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From wharehouse on June 23, 2010
Having been reading your story for something like 5 years now, I continue to enjoy its progression. Keep writing and I can't wait to read it through to the end :)
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From ANON - phil on May 19, 2010
just needed to tell you this is one of the better storys i have read cant wait to see how everything ends!!!
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From statnin on April 11, 2010
.....awwwwwweeesssssoooommmmeeee.......
knew u hadnt given up ;)
update soon
Leaf out
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From ANON - Josh B. on April 04, 2010
Hey Legilmyth? It's been a while since I read this story and since I am getting back to speed with Temari and her thing with Naruto. It's going to be hard to say this but Temari loves Naruto even though she doesn't know it yet. I think Kakashi needs to read that book a.s.a.p. I hope your muse gets back on the horse so you can make this story how it was. The best read in a long time hope you update soon.

Josh
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From Bloodlilly on March 31, 2010
This is a great story, I am enjoying every bit of it and I would really like to see more of it please. Keep up the great work. Wonderfull.
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From serenagold on March 30, 2010
I'm so excited that you've decided to continue and finish this!! This story has been on my recommended list, like, forever, and I'd hate to see it abandoned. You're background concept of the white chakara and the origin of demons was fantastic.

Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - ryan on March 29, 2010
awesome story
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From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2010
OMG! I am so glad I caught this update for this fic from you! I had been waiting for sooooo long! I was begining to think that the "theft" of this fic had lead you to abandon it. The story line is too good to let go. The hell with what the thief did! We all know who the really author is! It is bad and I have to admit that it pissed me off, but I was being selfish and wanted you to finish it. I am just glad you returned. Welcome back and thank you from the bottom of my heart. I have to be honest and say that I was really sad if you didn't finish it or did anything else again. There are not very many authors out there that can write and keep readers engaged. You are one of those few and it would be ashamed to loose your talented results. It would be a crime against reading dammit! Seriously, thanks for updating and aiming to finish it. Interesting history about Kakahi...I love that man. But Naruto and the way you describe him...oh mama...I need a shower now. Glad you are back...YAY!!!!
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From LadyLaran on March 28, 2010
*happy squeal* OMG, you updated!

Ok..something I have to point out. In the prior chappies, Shukaku is with Gaara but there is no explanation as to how. In the last chapter, Kakashi reminisces over Shukaku being taken. So how did he get back?

And does that mean Temari's rapist was a user of white chakra as well? And I do hope that Kakashi won't die. he's a jerk at times but loveable.

Yay...glad to see you're still working on this.
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From killendell on October 10, 2009
this story is fantastic. im loving every page! hope to see it continue! great work!

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