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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - david on April 14, 2006
    hey that was a great chapter i have read all eight of your chapters and they all have been great i cant wait to see how there day went please continue to update this great story its really sad to read about what happened to temari i wonder if she is going to be pregnant please update soon
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  • From ANON - Yondaime-dono on April 11, 2006
    Yo!

    Every now and then I come onto this site and search very carefully. I'm not into the whole porn thing, but every now and I browse and look for a story that isn't like that. It just ends up over here as opposed to at ff.net because the beginning situation is graphic and intense.

    The thing I like the most of what you've done with the characters is how you're slowly working these two together. You're showing patience most authors don't have. Thanks for not trying to make this a one-shot...it would have been awful.

    I have no idea what your intentions are...about whether or not this is going to end in a lemon, but I'll gladly read it up to that point. Good work.
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  • From ANON - Magiccat on April 11, 2006
    I love your story, I cant wait to find out what happens when gara gets there and naruto catches up with guys who hurt temari. Keep writting!
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  • From ANON - Darkness lives on April 10, 2006
    Oh wow you got another chapter up (jumps up and down^_^) I love naruto in this story, he is such a sweetheart!. I would love to see Meeka actually try to say that she thought he was cute to his face (that would be funny). Well I think that the black lining of his eyes just adds to his mystique and his good looks (oooooo^_^). Well I love the story and I cant wait to see the upcoming chapters, please post it up soon.

    P.S. Also I hope you don’t mind me reviewing again
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  • From ANON - Darkness lives on April 09, 2006
    Wow! I love this story so much, and I totally agree mmmmmmm Gaara, I love him. I’ve herd of getting a song such in your head but never a story, I cant stop thinking about it (sad eh?) I just cant wait for the next chapters, please write more soon.
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  • From Redwitch05 on April 07, 2006
    Awwwwwww. Naruto is such a sweet heart. I love the way this story is coming along. Can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Temari. I can only imagine how I'd feel. I hope Gaara, preferably Naruto, or maybe both. . .. .find those stupid guys that hurt her. Are you planning to bring up the rapers in the story? Like who they are? or if we even know them? just saying b/c something like this would NOT be going ignored by anyone. ESPECIALLY lil bro and Naruto. It's prolly silly to say this, but I envision Naruto as a Teddy bear when I read your fanfic. Not literal or anything. Just his sweet character. I really like it.
    Can't wait for the next chapter

    ~Redwitch05 ^.~
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  • From ANON - Jamie on April 06, 2006
    it's realy nice pleace post soon
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