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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - FireKitty on May 07, 2006
    YEA i liked that bit of story. Naruto is so protective of his friend *wink*wink*. He has such a good heart, and tenamri is so confused about her feelings.
    to be honest this is the best story i have read yet on AFF i give u props 2 thumbs up
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on May 05, 2006
    That is such a cute chapter ^^ I love the way everything progressed. Temari kissed Naruto back *squeals* that made my day. Y'know, I've thought of Naruto with Temari a couple of times, but I've never seen a fanfic about it till now. I like to read unique couples (and to me, gender doesn't really count b/c it's anime) and your story is so nice. I really do hope that you update soon. Temari needing to go get checked out kinda scares me. If she's pregnant ..... wow. I can only imagine the destruction that Gaara will bestow upon everyone. I really can't wait to find out who her rapers were. Knowing that Naruto is after them, they're as good as dead. I'm surprised you haven't mentioned Gaara in this chapter. I'd've expected him to stroll in Konoha as soon as he got word of his sister..........well, unless he hasn't received the scroll from the Hokage yet. ^^ Something else just came to mind. "Kyuubi's Fanclub"? *sighs* Poor Naruto-kun. I hope Temari does indeed rip their heads off. I feel sad that she doesn't have her Hitai-ate nor her fan.

    Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter. =^-^=


    Till then, later


    ~Reem ^.~
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  • From ANON - Jessica on May 04, 2006
    You've got me, you've hooked me. I fall before you in mercy. This is the best Naruto story that I really got into. I don't know if I can take anymore torture. I want them to figure out how they fill about each other so bad but at the same time I don't want it to be too rushed. I've read a lot of stories where one moment they hate each other and the next their going at it like rabbits. I want to know what Shikamaru is doing. As 'troublesome' as he is, I want to know what's going on with him. Even if it's just a few words about him. Like is he married with kids? I also like the fact that Naruto is so great with kids, though we already knew that because of Konohamaru and that snotty kid. So keep up the awesome work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on May 01, 2006
    I really love this story and cann`t wait till you finally get caught up with this story where you left off at so please update soon
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  • From ANON - dogbertcarroll on April 26, 2006
    Brilliant! Let me know when you update.
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  • From ANON - FireKitty on April 23, 2006
    AWWW what a cute first kiss and its funny as hell that he doesnt remember it. LOL i loved it and i want more
    I SCREAM U SCREAM WE ALL SCREAM 4 MORE STORY.
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  • From Asterisk on April 22, 2006
    Actually, this isn't bad at all. I don't normally go for romance, but since this site came up again I checked out this story. I'll say I got something I wasn't expecting, but it's not bothering me at all. The chapters are documented good, and end at decent spots. I'll probably keep reading, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan on April 22, 2006
    No need to apologize ^^ I enjoy reading your stories, and the wait is always worth it. I cracked up when Naruto realized that he had kissed Temari. And I love the way you made that little scene at the end w/ Toya and Meeka. Poor kid. And I'm glad that there's a story for a change where ppl like Naruto. Like the kids. That's so cute. You've portrayed Naruto the very way that I view him ^.^ You're amazing.
    Can't wait for the next chapter. And take your time, there's no rush. Afterall, what would happen if there weren't patience in the world ^^


    ~Redwitch05 ^.~
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  • From ANON - FireKitty on April 19, 2006
    KISS HER KISS HER i love the story and i just love it. It gets me so involved. And u have to have Kyubi and Naruto become one like Gaara and his demon
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  • From ANON - JOSH on April 19, 2006
    i LOVED YOUR STORY WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO POST A NEW CHAPTER
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  • From ANON - Jamie on April 18, 2006
    Amazing, you have to update
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  • From ANON - M on April 18, 2006
    oh my god!!!! WH Y IS THIS CHAPTER OVER!?!?! YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!!!

    your story is so outstandingly amazing, that i am 100% completely and totally addicted to it.

    more chapters, please!
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  • From ANON - padoopadoop on April 18, 2006
    YAY!!!!! You're back!!! I was so happy to see your story posted you probably heard the happiness all the way where you are!!! Please post more soon - I'm in withdrawal from your story!!! (Puppy-dog eyes.....)
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  • From ANON - The Skaboss on April 15, 2006
    *GASP!*
    well this definitely made my week, i was pretty sure that after AFF's "server improvement" this story was dead. Well, i'm just as psyched as ever for ch. 15 :D
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on April 14, 2006
    I love this story so far I have read all fourteen chapters yo have writen I cann`t wait till you catch up with this story when AFF was down well keep up the great work
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