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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - slaughter monkey on May 31, 2006
    awww poor kyubi
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  • From ANON - -green tree on May 31, 2006
    omg!!! swizeet story. took forever to updat i likez it keep up the good writing
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on May 20, 2006
    I feel so awful. I should have reviewed this chapter forever ago, but I was too caught up with work. I really wanted to leave a nice review, but I found myself postponing and postponing till. . . whatta'ya know, it's been over a week. *sighs* I'm sorry. T^T I feel awful. On with the story. I freaked when Hinata gave Temari the news that she was indeed pregnant. Poor girl. I mean, I don't believe in abortion. Babies are innocent. It's not like they planned to just show up. And as a human being. . . . well, you know, I believed you should bear the responsibility. You’re still the parent, afterall. I often questioned myself, b/c I'm a virgin, what would I do if I was raped and ended up getting pregnant. I can't even fathom what I'd put myself through. I told my friend that I would put up a helluva fight and they'd seriously end up raping a dead body, b/c I am strong. And you don't have to be physically strong to be strong. I have a strong will. Does that make sense? I believe that rapists should be executed, hung, burned alive, I don't care. Anyone would prolly do. Especially if it's done to a child. No one should be forced into that kind of mess.
    oh look at me, I'm going off topic. Gomen. I'm just a bit twisted in my own story and have a lot on my mind. Anyways, I have to be a bit quick b/c I'm leaving somewhere soon. I'm starting to believe that Gaara accidentally killed the messenger that was sent to Suna. Am I right? ^^ I like to guess. When Naruto came home and discovered that Temari was pregnant, I really began to think that you had made Temari go mental. She was becoming very unstable and when Naruto finally took control .. . Wow. I applaud. He took the situation very well, and it sounds as if he’d help her raise her kid. ^-^ ßThat makes me very happy. But still, I really REALLY can’t wait till Gaara and Kankurou find out. It’ll be interesting. Is Temari getting all tough again? Dude, she sounded like she was going to hunt those men on the spot and skin them alive. The images going through my head. . . . lol. . . . .they were priceless. Okay, no need in annoying you half to death. I hope you update soon. I’m very curious about what’s next to follow.

    Have a Nice Day, and keep up the Great work! ^-^



    Ria ^.~

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  • From ANON - FireKitty on May 20, 2006
    OH MY F**KIN GOD This cant be happening. I am very mad and sad i want to kill the people who violated Tem. and there is no telling what will happen when Gaara finds out will he attack naruto because he thinks he did it i cant wait to find out.
    Still great story continue please this is still the best story ive read i really want to se the people who violated Tem SUFFER BADLY
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  • From ANON - blutark on May 18, 2006
    will gaara kill the baby?
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  • From ANON - sailor mercury on May 16, 2006
    yay update!! you rule! weird ending but yay!
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  • From ANON - Slade on May 16, 2006
    sailor merc. told me about this story from i was taken in by it ive read it over and over.lol anyway im glad to see you updated...a kind of awkward ending but still nicely done
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  • From ANON - max suptual on May 16, 2006
    interesting so far when garra finds out it'll be great :-)
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  • From ANON - curious_corbie on May 14, 2006
    To the person who expressed their opinion on how the story should contiue with temari having an abortion, should she be pregant please, allow me to express mine. i am sorry, but if she does in fact turn out to be pregnant(excuse the poor spelling) it opens up miles and miles of possible cross roads as how the story can continue. Now alot of them can, could, will be lame yes but... you do not know legilmyth as i do. trust me, if she is pregnat, or even if she is not, there will be a twist that you will never see coming. she has this way... of completly throwing a person off, even one who helps... umm just a sec gotta think of the word.... correct errors in plot.(thats me :) ). don't get me wrong, i apologize if this sounds a little snappy, it was not my intention. I just thought i would express my feelings on your opinion and suggest that you continue reading for i can garuntee that there will events in this story that you may not see coming. :) but that of course is entirly up to you. you'll miss the good stuff if you quit now, but hey that s just me. if you do choose to discontinue reading, i thank you for reading as far as you did and reviewing cause it gets legilmyth's brain going all over again. have a good day:)
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  • From ANON - purebloodprince on May 13, 2006
    You really should have temari get the abortion or what ever it is they do in konoha to get rid of the forming child, it really wouldn't work well with your story, and HOnestly if you did, it would probably lose something that really got alot of people to read your story. If you have the abortion then things can continue the way they have been, but its your call. I doubt I'll continue reading if she has it, it's just a let down.
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  • From ANON - slain lord baki on May 12, 2006
    wow...amazing.....ive noticed it takes you awhle to update but it's prolly worth it considering everytime youv updated the wait was worth the new chap
    good work keep it up
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  • From ANON - ms.tuesday on May 10, 2006
    wow....i love this story i can't stop reading :-D keep up the good writing update soon plz!
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  • From ANON - james on May 10, 2006
    UPDATE NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
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  • From ANON - sailor mercury on May 09, 2006
    wow! i love this story prolly the best ive ever read!!!!!! im sending the link to my freinds i hope this is a long one lol byez!!
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  • From ANON - Darkness lives on May 09, 2006
    (yay im on cloud 9) wow I was not on the site for a while and was pleasantly surprised to find some new chapters up. You leave me with so many questions like when will Gaara get the massage about Temari? Will Temari attackers come back to finish the job? And how long will Naruto apartment stay clean? Oh so many questions, (you just love to torture us don’t you?) Well just here to say still reading and loving it.
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