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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - sonic sonar on June 13, 2006
    awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - Zak on June 11, 2006
    This fic is GREAT!! ^_^ Truly a good fic, and I'm excited to see where it goes from here, so please update soon, and also please get Naruto back to normal ASAP, I know it's just part of the fic, but I liked him better WITH Kyubi. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on June 11, 2006
    I ♥ you ^^ that chapter was awesome. The teasing scene with Sasuke and Neji was so funny. Brotherly love =^.^= You've gotta dig it ^.~ I love how their minds work. “You two are worse at jumping to conclusions then Sakura and Ino.” That was hilarious. “Are all the hotels full?” I love Sasuke and Neji. They're so cool as a team. I hate that other Anbu dude with the deer mask. If it's one thing that I hate, it's people who twist stories around into making others look bad. But about that fight btwn Naruto and Temari; that was sad. I feel so bad for the girl. She's not to blame for getting all crazy and wanting the baby gone. Hell, I think I would've killed /MYSELF/ if something like that was to happen to me. I know Naruto didn't mean harm, but I'm very dissapointed in the way he handled things. He, more than anybody, should know how lonesome someone feels when being ignored. It's a very empty feeling. A feeling that leaves you into thinking that you are unwanted and horrible to be around. Or in Temari's words, "desgusting." I felt like crying when I was reading her internal monologue about how she felt. Completely and thoroughly depressed. And it angers me now that she probably doesn't even feel comfortable around Naruto. If I was in her shoes, and yes I've been trying to grasp a strong visual of how my life would be if I was her, then I'd leave his apartment with a message telling him my thanks for keeping me there and that I'll be going on with my life. And of course, I wouldn't be expecting him to look for me. (btw, does Naruto still have his keen sense in smelling now that the Kyuubi has been completely blocked from him?) just curious, it'll help my imagination progress. =P Sometime while I was reading your latest chapter, I came to wonder about that Anbu w/ the deer mask. He keeps falsifying the reports, and that's beginning to get to me. I'm starting to suspect that maybe /he/ knows about the attackers who raped Temari. hmmm.... *frowns in thought*

    Can't wait for your next chapter. Keep up the great work ^^

    ≈Redwitch05 . . . or you can call me Ria ♥
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  • From ANON - Zak on June 11, 2006
    GREAT start, and a Naruto/Temari fic sounds interesting, so keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on June 05, 2006
    I have such a great reason for not being able to comment on your story right away. Okay, see, this is what happened. Someone had knocked over our cable wire and it took Charter over a week just to send someone over to my house and fix it. I couldn't go anywhere else to get on the computer b/c of constant babysitting, and when I DID finally get the net back, I couldn't find your story. *sighs* Gomen. I'm glad that my comments don't annoy you ^^* I loved the chapter. Poor Kakashi. And man, talk about Drama. I can't believe that Naruto was able to love up Kyuubi completely. I feel sorry for the mongrel. So, it was HIM that saved that baby. That caught me by surprise. I had no idea. I was thinking, you know how Naruto is being an ass right now? well, I'm a sadist to be saying this, but I'd so have those Akatsuki members come back and kidnap Temari. Btw, does Naruto still have his sensitive and advaced nose senses? Yeah, just wondering. Is he just mad b/c Temari wanted an abortion? B/c I wouldn't really blame her. But then again, like I said before, I don't believe in abortions. It's not like the baby had anything to do with it.
    Can't wait to hear what happened to that messenger and what's going on with Gaara. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for an update.

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    Ria ^.~
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  • From ANON - Don on June 04, 2006
    this is a great one so far cant wait until the next chapter is done
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  • From ANON - Mugen on June 04, 2006
    GReat story keep it up.
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  • From ANON - FireKitty on June 03, 2006
    giving a little body to the story is allways good
    and yes "SUFFER BADLY" a very delicate term but that is whats so good about it
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  • From ANON - shadowfox49201 on May 31, 2006
    More i need more. update soon.
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  • From ANON - atfalu on May 31, 2006
    well..a long wait but the new chapter was well worth it...i suppose it will be longer and longer due to summer..oh well keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - anti up bitch on May 31, 2006
    nice story
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  • From ANON - addiautti on May 31, 2006
    WOOOOOOO CHAPTER 13 AFTER AN EXCRUCIATING WAIT!! NARUTO AIN'T THE ONLY ! HAVIN WITHDRAWL SYMPTOMS! review fast i need me fix!! 0_x
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  • From ANON - sonic sonar on May 31, 2006
    i don't know...i read it...i just can't get in to it..don't know why.....oh wellguess different people like different things ...its written well though nice detail
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  • From ANON - Slade on May 31, 2006
    wow..and i thought it couldn't get any better nice job
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  • From ANON - sailor mercury on May 31, 2006
    yay another good chapter! keep it up :-)
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