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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - Sean on June 30, 2006
    Thanks for this quite good creative work. I particularly like how you maintain the panicked feelings Temari has. It seems to flow well. I'm waiting for when the deamon fox will get his chance to call naruto an idiot. thanks again
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  • From ANON - Because I Can on June 28, 2006
    YAY! I caught up. It took me all night to read. I gonna go sleep now.
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  • From ANON - nonengel on June 28, 2006
    i'm glad to see this survive the changes this site has undergone, its definelty one of the more interesting stories unde rthe naruto fandom here. Your character portrayals have been fantastic as well as how strongly the mood of the story is felt.
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  • From ANON - wraithguardstar on June 28, 2006
    ok, now that i'm calm and done reading...

    i'm real big on hating rapists.

    rasing the child of someone who raped you could be on eof the circles of hell as far as im concerned.

    just threw me for a loop, sorry about the shouting.

    you're a good writer i think, i like the story, aside from her not terminating the pregnancy as soon as hinata said the word.


    anyways, keep updating ^.^
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  • From ANON - wraithguardstar on June 27, 2006
    chapter 12.


    the idea that you would somehow classify aborting a pregnancy begat from rape as a bad thing blows my mind.


    limp wristed pro-lifer retard.


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  • From ANON - FireKitty on June 27, 2006
    THANK YOU 8-)
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  • From ANON - Church on June 27, 2006
    you know I never really payed attention to some of the real deep facts but now I do and Naruto can get any girl Kakashi says eh? godamn lucky son of a gun!!! Man Kyuubis cool hes just trying to help him out with Temari and stuff......and getting laid all the more i mean come on what dude wouldnt YEAH!!! I didnt know that most of the village liked him now I thought they still hated him inyour story meh well i re read everythn so yeah and that ANBU bastard is a asshole I say HANG HIM!!! HE MUST DIEY!!! ok later dude!
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on June 26, 2006
    Very interesting sotry and I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to future updates.
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  • From ANON - Stuey on June 17, 2006
    Been awhile since I've reviewed, lost track of this thing a while back. Story's coming along ok, though I'm not the biggest fan of things going from bad to worse for Naruto and Temari both. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - FireKitty on June 13, 2006
    OMG UR KILLING ME fireKitty wants more RAWR (JK but dont stop)
    but i can see where u would be kind of stuck on where to continue
    i want Tem to tell some1 else about her "condition" And i want Naruto to forgive Tem and tell her he doesnt hate her that would be so sweet AWWWW
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  • From ANON - Slade on June 13, 2006
    hmm is the guy in the deer mask part of the people who attacked temari?
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  • From ANON - max suptual on June 13, 2006
    not bad..not bad at all keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - crystal tears on June 13, 2006
    oooo nicely written
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  • From ANON - addiautti on June 13, 2006
    update soon plz!
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  • From ANON - ms.tuesday on June 13, 2006
    very nice. keep up the good work
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