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By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - Church on July 01, 2006
    OMFG HE HAD A KID OH SHIIIIITTTT OHHHHHH SHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT!!!!! DAMN!!! im gettn hella goosbumps from that man whoooo its a very good high i actually yelled out loud and shit cuz of dat man i got in trouble but it was worth it reading you stories and stuff man its jsut awesome and KYUUBI!!!! his awesomeness must return he i s a playa ho ho ho!!! damn shes keepn the baby well its wrong to kill it but its also kinda odd to keep it considering it was from a rape and oh forget it too mjuch controversy on dat man gives ye a headache but a she gets a kid! but i wonder the one who impregnated her is of someone illustrious or well known or somethng...hmmm well ya cna have a kid that doesnt have your blood but he still can be a son to ye and Temaris rape may have been planned?!?!?! a conspiracy!!! to start a war or something to to get rid of Naruto and stuff maybe? godamn so many possiblilities and thinking i am fuckn confused but ey its a good feeling and i cant wait for the next chappy its liek a drug i need more and more and more *hands many milliolns of dollas* i need more thn a nickelbag chapter of this story man its awesome WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!11111111111 lol
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  • From ANON - FireKitty on July 01, 2006
    WHAT 0_o
    well good job i still love your story thanks again for getting that out of Tem and there was no 1 better to tell it to than Hinata.


    p.S. im not an aothor yet but I have some storys i want to write in the next month or so i would love it if u would review them.
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  • From ANON - DBlaZe on July 01, 2006
    Hey, I am one of your FF readers and I accidentially stumbled across this version. You've been holding out on me, damn you! Honestly you have me looking in my mail box every day for an alert that the next chapter is up. And now I find three whole new chapters. Well the wait was worth it and even would have been if I had to wait longer. And as far as all time most messed up places to end a chapter ... I officially nominate chapter 15 for the win. Damn, I have said it before and I will say it again hell of a story.

    ps Thankyou for giving my man Rock Lee Sakura. It warms my heart to see the man getting some.
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  • From ANON - Bluebomber on July 01, 2006
    Holy shit! Bombshell time, perfect chapter to one of my favorite stories of all time. From the first chapter this story has had me hooked and i'm glad to see it hasn't been put on hiatus for too long, please do continue it . Though i'm busy trying to figure out how it will end it is obvious there are still a few surprises left in store, looking forward to it!
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  • From ANON - padoopadoop on July 01, 2006
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! It's out it's out it's out it's out it's out - the new chapter is out!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! *happy dance around the room* Finally Naruto starts to get a clue and open up to Temari about his problems *more happy dance*. Of course knowing my luck with not being able to predict your story, right about when things start gong well Gaara will show up and complicate it more. The whole Kakashi and Tsunade flirting/turn-on thing caught me so completely by surprise I had to stop reading and call my friend who has been following this story too! (BTW, any chance of you updating Return to Sound soon?) As always, I LOVED it! Keep up the good work!! (And update soon please?)
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  • From ANON - scribbles on July 01, 2006
    OMG this is good.

    I got sucked into reading it about 5 hours ago and just got to the end of whats written.

    I wish there was some alert featire on aff to know when a new chapter is, but this is good enough it will just have to get added as a favorites bookmark so I can keep watch for the next chapter,,,

    The characterization is amazing. Its like not a ginle character is weak in how they are presented, they are just *boom* themselves, even if just for a cameo.

    Wow

    --Scribbles
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  • From ANON - sailor mercury on July 01, 2006
    awww shes gonna keep the baby! gaara's gonna kill everything.....whats happening with him btw?? lol update please.!
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  • From ANON - addiautti on July 01, 2006
    this chapter was nice!! update soon plz!
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  • From ANON - ms.tuesday on July 01, 2006
    and another wonderful addition!!!! yay! love this story nice job on this chapter so happy shes keeping it!!
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  • From ANON - max suptual on July 01, 2006
    i liked this....very long compared to the other chapters awesome job! keep it up
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  • From ANON - slade on July 01, 2006
    hmm....i think i may have a feeling where this is going....this chapter didn't really advance the story line to much besides the fact on what shes gonna do with the baby and the kyuubi thing....but it was a long chapter and a good read. i enjoyed it very much keep up the good work :-
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  • From ANON - shade on July 01, 2006
    you leave a cliffhanger like that and then say you don't know when you are going to be updating!!!!!!!!!!!!! please more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your ever loyal and devoted fan!!!!!!! PLEASE i beg of you! Update!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on July 01, 2006

    Wow. That was a GREAT chapter. VERY long too. I woke up a couple of hours ago and immediately started reading it. I can’t believe that ANBU asshole. What a damn jerk. He deserved what was coming. He should be kicked off Anbu for purposely falsifying a report. I hope Naruto really does tell the Kazekage about what happened. That ass deserves some permanent damage to be marred into thick skull. I hope he doesn’t try to get Naruto back or anything. Not that he can. Unless you have something up your sleeves?

    I loved that scene with Tsunade and Kakashi. So cute. And their internal monologues made it more humorous. Are you thinking about making them into a couple, perhaps? If so, then it’ll be my first to actually read such a pairing. But of course with YOUR writing style it would be easily pulled off. The little peck on the cheek was really cute. Made me burst in giggles.

    Hinata is so awesome. I just love that girl. The way you portrayed her and everything. Finally someone was able to get through our Sand kunoichi. I can’t begin to fathom how emotional the topic was for her was. She has her own kids, after all. But I could clearly understand about not wanting to be the one to perform the abortion. That’s something that’s always been a sensitive topic in itself for me.

    I don’t know whether it’s a good thing or not, but I’m liking the fact that Kyuubi can still do something for Naruto. Like healing him. I was laughing when he did back flips at the news that Temari would be keeping her baby. I did not expect her, however, to ask Naruto if he wanted to be the Godfather. Obviously, there were a lot of things that were not expected from this chapter, but that one really surprised me. I wonder what his answer will be. He still seems a bit distraught with all the things that have happened, and I could only hope that he doesn’t turn down the request. It’s not that I think that you’ll do that, it’s just that I can’t predict my sweet blonde’s actions at the moment. And is it just me, or does he still seem angry? I hope not. God I really hope not.

    You are incredible. Thank you so much for providing such a long and healthy chapter. And enjoy your summer as your write. I definitely do NOT expect for you to have another long chapter like that, and that would obviously be okay. Otherwise, you’d be losing your sanity over my long reviews. *winces* wow, I really have to shut up now. Take care


    Have a Nice Day ^^



    Ria ^.~



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  • From ANON - Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul on July 01, 2006
    Yeah now thats what I am talking about!!!!! Man that was a good chapter and I was so happy that it came out ^_^. Keep up the great work and update when you have time please.

    I had the Phoenix Souls added to my name after I joined there writers guild :)
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  • From ANON - James on July 01, 2006
    that was awsome please update very very soon like imedeetly
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