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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - DeathAngel on July 19, 2006
    sweet
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 18, 2006
    Hey Legilmyth great story. I had to re-read it cuz I got a bit lost cuz of certain chapters when they argue with themselves. I like this story so much I already read 11 chapters since Yesterday and today. By reading these stories that all of you put up kinda helps me get lost in the story and I don't sleep a lot during the night anyways so you can say I have insomnia during the night. I am glad that your a good writer and hope to see an update soon. Hope Kyubi and Naruto get to figure out what to do. I hope Temari and Naruto stay together. I have a question what was Garra say about letting Temari be were she belonged in the 2nd Chapter I believe. e-mail me to help me out with understanding a few things please
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  • From ANON - Shadow on July 16, 2006
    I just love your fanfic. I've read all the chapters so far, and every one is great. There are misspellings here and there, but it's still a really good plot. Out of a 1-10 rating give this a 9. 1 subtracted for misspellings. That's ok though, cause I misspell A lot of things too. Lol ^-~ Please continue with this great work, I'm enjoying it a lot. And I think you're really good at this. I know I couldn't do all this. x-x

    -Shadow
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  • From ANON - Chinoodin on July 16, 2006
    It is an amzing story very well developed. I hope you make a sequel to it, probably couple years after maybe _>
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  • From Marduk69 on July 11, 2006
    You evil bitch, I hate you, I love you GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
    I love where you are taking this, the character developement, the story as a whole, everything.
    You have provided 15 chapters of one of the most original and most enjoyable fanfics I have read, period.
    You have also kicked me in the pants with awesome twists, and I do so enjoy the pain.
    Thank you for your story so far, and please update when you can.

    This ends my weirdest/creepiest review.
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  • From ANON - TsknRaider on July 09, 2006
    Finally, I've been waiting for you to post this chapter forever. Yeeah, Chapter 16 is next! I noticed some improvements from the first chapter 15, good job. I'm just checking in with this review to show you I still think about your story. Happy Writing!
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  • From ANON - naruto#1fan hate sasuke on July 09, 2006
    his own what what will happen tell me update
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 06, 2006
    Hey I read every chapter from like 6:00 til about 5:00 in the morning. I just can't sleep so I decided to let my mind go into a reading frenzy to read this story that u have wrote so good that I ca actually see Naruto as he is in ur story. But I never sought a few of ur couples and what happened to Sakura. Naruto cares for Terami but he doesn't go on his feelings. Y did he decide to lock up the Nine tailed fox as his demon part of him. Now I see he didn't want to be talked to by a demon all day and now that his demon got a crack to help Naruto some. What is going on with Kakashi and Iruka. R they going to be a couple that ur going to showcase later in the chapter. But Terami and Naruto is a great pairing that I didn't see but Grat story and e-mail at JTB8834@aol.com to let me know if u ever need help with a chap or to say u updated this great story
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2006
    i have been waitin 4 ever for more of this fic i love after the pain n not to b mean i love all the angest that narutos goin rhrough casuase we all know in the end he'll get the happieness that he diserves. thank u thank u for makin this chappy so long it really makes up for the wait. please up date soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Akras on July 03, 2006
    Well, this is really a nice fanfiction. I usually don't review, but this fiction is well written, has a definite and original plot, and also very important it's not rushed at all. This is very good because honestly many fictions have been ruined by hasty development. I am truly curious to know how you will contine it.

    A small advice/request though. Could you move it to the heterosexual section? General is swamped by yaoi... and it's a real pain to search for the ficton amidst a mountain of yaoi c***.

    Sincerely, Akras
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  • From ANON - Cam on July 03, 2006
    Gah...how could you end it right there. I hope you have a good lawyer, because you just commited murder by cliffhanger.
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  • From ANON - Jon on July 02, 2006
    the chapter is sooo good....
    update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Kuldain on July 02, 2006
    Nice chapter, good interaction with characters, I enjoy the plot as well. 43 pages is amazing, and to tell the truth, it didn't even seem that long since I was so engrossed in the story ^^ keep up the good work, I could only hope that my story on FF will be as good!
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  • From ANON - zerotru on July 02, 2006
    very good chapter i hope i new one comes out soon
    its nice to read new stuff tho
    anyways keep up the good work
    btw this smut is very well written
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  • From ANON - Darkness lives on July 02, 2006
    Oh wow that was a long chapter, just the way I like em! The best way I can describe this chapter is like saying it’s a roller coaster. The hole scene with Tsunade and Kakashi really made me think this story was going to have a Tsunade/Kakashi paring but that hole scene with Iruka made me seriously rethink that. Is there anything more to Kakashi and Irukas relationship or am I the only one who thinks that? Well any way I got another question, what’s the deal with that ending

    “Its all right, I know I’ve been more then a little trying since I got here.” Her smile got a little bigger. “But 0
    But 0? But 0 what? Is that a mistake or some kind very suspenseful ending I don’t understand. Well anyway id also like to say I really like how you portrayed the scene in Tsunade office when Naruto confronts the ANBU, hehehe serves him right for talking about Naruto and Temari like that. Wow that was a long review for me, well im still a faithful reader and a great topper to the Canada day celebration and I cant wait for the next chapter please post it soon!
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