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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - gryphonsknight on October 29, 2006
    Its very well thoought out and very interesting, im hoping that in the next chapter you'll bring Gaara back into the story.
    keep up the great work on this and ur other stories i love to read them

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  • From ANON - Nellysan on October 29, 2006
    Wow. It's amazing. At first I refused to read this because I hate the idea of a Naruto/Temari pairing yet the way you write makes it seem extremely good. The only problem I have is the fact that you have a lot of typos and sentences are grammarically wrong at points. And yes, it's kinda weird having Temari keep the baby or even having one in the first place. Imagine if it was Zetsu's child or something. THAT'D be weird >.>

    Nellysan,
    Bahamut916@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - kyubi_teaser on October 29, 2006
    yay! so happy theres another chapter! this is one of the few fics I always look forward to being updated!

    and I know I say this every update but....

    DAMNIT WHERE'S GAARA!?!?! *lol*

    It's not nice to tease the teaser! *gryns*

    ~Teaser
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  • From ANON - James on October 29, 2006
    UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - nonengel on October 29, 2006
    great chapter, i loved the training with iruka. He's always been a character that i had wished to see further developed in the managa. Seeing as thats not happening its good to see skilled fan authors doing it themselves
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  • From ANON - Tactician on October 29, 2006
    I love this story and I hate that someone did that. Please Keep righting these adictive to read storys. And I can't wait the N/T Lemon (Aaahh lemons BX sour face.)
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on October 29, 2006
    i have to say. besides naru/hina pairings, naru/tema have that vibe between them. not quite loving but put in the right story and it does work. it's also like a brother/sister relationship sometimes. i think i'm falling in love with this pairing cause it brings out the real softer side of naruto when he's around temari. hmmm wonder if that's what shika felt like. anyways nice job and i'm glad that pirating issue is over and done with. pirating someone else's hard work of a story is not cool.
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  • From ANON - Davie on October 26, 2006
    you have every right to be upset and i dont think u are over reacting at all. i wont pretend to have any idea how hard u worked on ATP but i believe u worked your ass off. it is one of my favorite fics and i will miss the updates until this mess gets straightened out. do what you gotta do.

    sincerely,
    Davie
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 21, 2006
    I AGREE WITH ANON. DON'T LET THEM WIN.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 21, 2006
    this message is mainly for the person stealing this story. I AM A HACKER. I WILL FIND YOU IF THIS DOESN'T STOP. I WILL TAKE ALL OF YOUR PERSONNEL INFORMATION AND USE IT TO MAKE YOU POOR AS DIRT. YOU RUINED THIS FOR ME AFTER I HAD FINALLY FOUND A STORY I LIKE. AND I WILL FIND YOU. SO I WOULD STOP WHAT YOUR DOING AND SEND AN APOLOGY TO Legilmyth SO WE CAN ALL FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
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  • From ANON - Damp on October 21, 2006
    O.O WHO WOULD DO SUCH A THING!!! if i were u i would track the person and MAKE THEM PAY!!! i would say i was a fan (hide ur identity) of this guy and and then once u have gained their trust (as the saying goes "keep ur friends close but keep ur enemy's closer) THEN STAB IN THE BACK (not being literal but i hope u know wat i mean) CUZ THAT'S JUST WRONG!!! and i hope u know that once i found out that some one was ripping u off (i have been with this story since day one) I KNOW HOW U FELT!!! all that work and then some guy/girl just comes sneaking off and STEALING IT'S WORTH!!! MAN I HOPE THEY DIE OF GUILT!!! or at least feel bad enough to say it to EVERYONE who had been deceived by him/her that THE WORK THEY WERE MAKING WAS NOT THEIRS!!! *sob* and that this person is KILLING me cuz i SO DESPERATLY WANT TO FINISH THIS!!! (i am an avid reader for this one) *tears* *gives u a hug* hope u beat the shit out of this guy/girl AND THAT U RN'T THE ONLY ONE SUFFERING!!! we ,ur fans for this story, R SUFFERING TOO!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2006
    I really hope you read your reviews and aren't like many authors who just want them and never even read them. Mainly I have to admitt, the way you handled the situation with your story being stolen is the wrong way. Not completing your story means the person who stole it wins. They can now claim the story as theirs and even butcher it and then when you do update it could be said they you stole your story. Honestly, it really is up to you what you do but I've had the same situation happen to me where someone stole my story and I got so annoyed I took my story down. The person continued to post my story and in fact created their own end. When I put my story back up I got many review telling me I stole the story and the person even went so far as to report my story and it was banned from ff.net. Had I continued my story, I don't think that situation would have happened. I mean we are all adults here. If someone stole your story say screw them and go on posting. You take a huge risk putting your story on the internet for all to read and unfortunatly AFF.net doesn't offer protection to keep the stories from being stolen such as not allowing right clicking on the site so they can't copy it. If your story was stolen on another site just take it off that site and post it here and make sure you report it. The only way to get the story shut down is to report it. Honestly the note you made might even cause the person who stole it to get their friends to mass post the story after you get it taken down. Trust me. I've seen it all happen to friends of mine. Like I said it's up to you what you do but please do think of your fans. I know from my situation, I lost a lot of my fans when I took my story down because they stop looking for my story.
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  • From ANON - Se7en on October 18, 2006
    Yo, this is a really good fic you have going here. It has alot of nice ideas for the future couplings and lives of Naruto characterrs. At first I was afraid that this fic was going to be another one of the "I hate this character so I am gonna' have her raped and beat and then..." You have really done a good job here. Keep it up. I give this fic, a 5... out of 5.

    Side note: And believe it or not I am somewhat glad that there has been no lemon so far. My cousin is 16 and thinks Temari is awesome so I showwed her your fic. She loved id and actually copied it onto her come so she could read it again.
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  • From ANON - Akkina on October 18, 2006
    After the pain is one of those great stories that only come along every once in awhile. Your story has taken me through a wide range of emotions and leaves me wanting more. The thought that someone would disregard all the work and all the spirit you put into this story just so they could steal it makes me sick. If they aren't willing to do the work than how dare they take the credit? I've had this happen with a story I wrote in school and I went two weeks trying to prove to my teacher, the principal, and my parents that it was my work. I wish you luck in finding the thief. When you do return to updating, just know I'm eagerly waiting. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Charlie on October 14, 2006
    I really likes this story as well as return to sound like i have said in past reviews and i would like to help you get this theft fixed. If you would be willing to email me a link for the site where the rip off of After the Pain was found i would do all i could to help fix this injustice. (Yes i do think of this the same way you do and no i don't think you are over reacting) I would really like to help you if you give me the chance.

    Please email me at kilrath@gmail.com
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