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Reviews for After the pain

By : Legilmyth
  • From ANON - Gavin McBaine on December 04, 2006
    God I love this story; and the new chapter only confirms my feelings. I hate to sound like a die hard fan, even though i am one, but PLEASE PUT UP MORE!!! I DREAM OF THE NEXT CHAPTER AND MUST READ IT OR I WON"T GET A GOOD NIGHTS SLEEP!!!
    as always much love and hope everything is goign well.

    Gavin McBaine AKA STillnotwalking
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  • From ANON - nonengel on December 04, 2006
    its great to see a new chapter to this, i'm glad to see the message finally made it into the sand.

    i enjoyed the laid back feel that a good portion of this chapter had, naruto's "role" in the village continues to interest me

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2006
    i love this story. great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul on December 03, 2006
    Yay, another wonderful chapter and the messenger finally was able to deliver the really important letter hehe. Keep up the great work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - kyubiteaser on December 03, 2006
    boy now THAT was a teaser! At least it had Gaara (finally) LOL

    Now in the next chapter Temari jumps Naruto right? *winkwinknudgenudge*

    Keep up the good work, and good luck on the NFA's! One more month to go!

    ~Teaser
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  • From promise2003 on December 03, 2006
    It took me like a month of reading this on again and off again to finally get caught up (I'm busy...very busy), but I just want to say that you're fluffy NarutoTemari love has me doing happy flips. I love it, so cute.
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  • From ANON - Darking on November 28, 2006
    Hey.Please continue with this story.;-; I've been dying to read the rest of it.
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  • From ANON - aznpuffyhair on November 23, 2006
    interesting story... i'm not sure if u mentioned Choji, but i don't remember. Anyway, nice job, and really, who is this mysterious guy? And where is Jiraiya anyway? o.O

    And damn, i was joping Jewel would be alive so she'll have a beating of her life... by Temari of course.

    Well, keep it up and UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - PenpusherM on November 12, 2006
    This really is a wonderful story. And i really mean it- it's riveting.
    Cheers,
    Pen
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  • From ANON - Auric on November 03, 2006
    Good Job. You really caught the possible personalities of the characters. I'm sure that Masashi Kishimoto didn't intend for his characters to develop in the direction you're taking but considering the fact that the setting is at least a decade in the future there is definitely a fair chance of them maturing in the ways you've outlined. Keep up the good work and dont stop for any reason; youre too good of a writer to be stopped by the shortsighted, closed-minded views of anyone who disagrees with your opinion of the characters of Naruto.
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  • From ANON - dattebayochan on October 31, 2006
    I have really been enjoying this story, so much so that I panicked when I lost the bookmark to it and couldn't remember the name! Thank goodness I did. I really do enjoy this pairing and I think you've faithfully followed Temari's personality considering the circumstances of what she's been through. What happened in her own family, how awfully Gaara was treated, would surely make her want to cherish and love the little one inside her. A kind of apology for the past as it were.

    I can't wait to see Gaara again in this. I totally loved him going out into the desert and raging over her disappearance. It was a completely 'Gaara' thing to do.

    I'm also enjoying your version of Naru. Naruto has always shown flashes of great wisdom and insight between his moments of slowness, and it's refreshing to see fics that show that side of him, rather than portraying him as a complete moron 24/7.

    Keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - TsknRaider on October 30, 2006
    Yeah A New Chapter! Its really good...but when is Gaara coming back into the picture?
    Well Keep up the Good Work!
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  • From ANON - Because I Can on October 30, 2006
    this story just gets better every time i read it.
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  • From ANON - Josh B on October 29, 2006
    Hey Justsaying hiand hope your doing good.Love the update andI might have to read afewof the chapters againhope you e-mail me lateron and we can talk some more if you want...JTB8834@aol.com... Keep up the great writings and hope to see more of your story soon...
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on October 29, 2006
    sweet
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