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Reviews for Ice Picks and Hand Grenades

By : XHidaka
  • From ANON - valanthe on May 28, 2006
    I've always though that yellow roses mean jealousy...
    What is funny, this interpretation also fits the story :)
    You doing a great job, Shika seems so.. I don't know how to put this, he is almost like I always though he should be (that is in my twisted mind :) )
    I hope this story will continue soon :)
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  • From ANON - monchy on May 28, 2006
    hmmm... intresting, but i don't get who will be the pairings in the end. i kinda get what will happen in the next chapter. hehehehe...
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on May 27, 2006
    That... Friggen rocked!

    I loved the part with the flowers and the way Shikamaru picked out one for Kiba. Yes, this chapter had a bit more angst than the others, but it worked out well, I enjoyed it. You have to have some problems here and there in a story.

    I totally think you should make Shika and Kiba a couple and if it will be a long and hard road, well, I don't care! The more drama the better I say! :D

    So update soon, alright? That cliffhanger really left us clinging onto the edge and I can't wait to find out if we fall or climb back up (whoa, weird metaphor right there). Keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - monchy on May 20, 2006
    hmm... the scene with sakura is kinda good and does the pairing really stick to the end??? or there are others??? hehehehe update soon.
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on May 19, 2006
    One word: Wow... Wowdidiwowow.AWESOME job!

    You write Shikamaru so well, you're like the... the... Shika-Queen or something. If you can't own Naruto, might as well own him!! :D

    I loooved this chapter, it was very well done. The flashbacks were cool, I liked how you put them in. The ending wasn't too angsty, least I don't think so.... I am an angst lover so I guess I'm a bit biased. I liked how you wrote Shikamaru in that last scene with Sakura, you really brought out his character there.

    Anyways, I'm going to stop ranting. I tent to rant if I really like a story, so pat yourself on the back!!!

    What's going to happen with Shika and Kiba???? Update soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - monchy on May 13, 2006
    wow good lemon. kinda bad for a chapter ending, but hope to update soon.
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  • From LazyNinjaLuvr on May 12, 2006
    Reading this has made me soooo giggly! I absolutely adore Shika X Kiba-ness! I've only gotten to read the first chapter and I love it! I'll definately be back to read at a more reasonable time (it's almost 2 in the morning and my brain is totally messed up lol). I
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  • From ANON - Shawn on May 11, 2006
    Well now that was really hot ^_^ Grr this is like my favorite naruto ff on this site lol. Shikamaru and Kiba are so sexy lol you should totally have someone else "walk in on them and join" *cough cough but not Neji cause he is scary looking and not very sexy lol sry I too am an insane little pervert lol I love your story it's just so great and i'm really glad that unlike many people you actually update quickly. Could I fall for a better story lol Great job ^_^
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on May 11, 2006
    Awesome chapter, I loved it. The lemon was fine, so don't worry.

    I thought the whole scene with the store was fun-- 'cept for the part with the brothers doing it.... that kinda weirded me out because I imagined them being overweight hairy guys. :S


    Anyways, great job and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Shawn on May 03, 2006
    Thank you thank you thank you!!!! ^_^ I was waiting for that to happen lol. You really are a great writer. Cant wait for chapter 5 ;P
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on May 01, 2006
    Awesome story! I've never read this pairing before but I'm already addicted!! Great job, your writing is very flowing.

    can't wait till the next chapter (wink!) Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on April 22, 2006
    Geez, I keep picking fics that get JUST to the point of lemony goodness and then they stop! >.< This fic is really fantastic though! Shika is perfect and I think totally in character. Shika is so apathetic he's hard to write, without making him seem depressed. You've done an excellent job and I'm totally looking forward to reading more. Yeah! :)
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  • From ANON - Shawn on April 20, 2006
    If you dont write a 4th chapter I'm going to hunt you down and make you write it like in that one movie lol. Seriously though you're a fantastic writer I love it a lot I actually was reading it like I was reading a book which is rare when I read fan fics but you have talent. Thank god someone does ^_^ lol Plz write another chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Bunta-chan on April 11, 2006
    OOOHHH!!! Shika and Kiba... yummy!! ^^ And poor Shika! He's just getting the shit kicked out of him. lol

    Very nice chapter. I love the kissing, oooooh gave me chills with the description. ^^ Keep it up!

    me
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  • From Cepheus on April 11, 2006
    that was absolutely greart.

    so it's gonna be KibaShika? I really don't care which couple it ends up with because really, with shika and naruto I like all of them. only ask them yaou (and uke!Naruto XDXDXD) I would love ShinoShika as well if I can help.


    anyway, poor shika-kun, he really has a bad day today. sigh *snickers* anyway, the chapter was just plainly wonderful and I hopeyou will post another soon! ^^ you made me happy because I was thinking about your fic before entering in AFF.net and wondering whether or not you would update... and I had a chapter! ^^

    thanks!

    Ceph

    PS= I think the plot is freaking interesting. I also hope we'll have a little bit more of SasuNaru (though my real fav is ItaNaru... XD)
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