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Reviews for Ice Picks and Hand Grenades

By : XHidaka
  • From sris on August 15, 2006
    OYFG! This is just way too HOT! I've only read the first four chapters and WOW! I love how you write Shikamaru's thoughts and descripe everything that's happening. I'm so glad there's still seven chapters for me to read tonight. I actually laughed when I read the A/N in the end of ch4. I've had the same feeling of Jaw drops. I can’t BELIEVE I just wrote that… I love that your taking your time with them. Enough of me commenting and on with the reading. I'm just so happy, happy, happy for this story. And I love this pairing. OK, now I go...
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on August 14, 2006
    OOh, I was so happy when I found that you updated! I literally squealed (and my mom gave me a weird look...)!

    A great chapter, you use your words really well and everything has a sense of flow. I wasn't really surprised with the Temari/Tenten pairing, I think I've seen it before. They're a cute couple.

    I wonder what's going to come out of this A-ranked mission?? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - kitty on July 13, 2006
    i really like this story so far i've never really thought of shikamaru and kiba being a together but after reading your story they are now one of my favorite pairings.
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  • From ANON - Rain on July 07, 2006
    Wow! This is very well written, and although I think you may be making sheika a little too emotional, I can sorda ignore that. but really I love this fic, and the whole thing gots me leanin towards a threesome... I mean I like the shino/kiba pairing, but I also like the way you have the sheika/kiba relationship going... Threesome, Please? Hehehe, yep definantly going to keep an eye this story, great work and update soon! *Runs off to read more yaoi*
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  • From ANON - Jassy on June 30, 2006
    You must update, quick! It's too amazingly, hott, not too!


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  • From ANON - valanthe on June 27, 2006
    Filler episodes s**ks :)
    yet still there is a hope for this story :)
    just give us some action with Shika and Kiba :)
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  • From ANON - scribbles on June 25, 2006
    Woohoo another chapter of this .... that wa a nice surprise to get when checking over AFF for stuff to read.

    I love how ... disgruntled Shikamaru is, I can't think of a better word :) and everyone's interaction is awesome
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 25, 2006
    Hehe, loved this chapter. Drunken Temari is so entertaining, though I guess Shikamaru would definetly think differently. It must be good now that he's out of the hospital, though.

    Don't worry about the famers or lack of reviews, this story is great and if they can't see that then screw them!! :D:D

    (sigh) You write Shikamaru so well, I don't think I've ever read a better written Shika any where else.

    Anyways, awesome story so far! Keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Inuyasha_is_mine on June 25, 2006
    woo i loved this chap!!! haha go drunken naruto!! and omg sasuke and even neji too o.O wow who would of thunk it? lol anyways poor shika and kiba xD such an unsteady errr relationship i guess i can say since they both have feelings for one another..*sigh* so troublesome indeed..love what can i say ^^...hope to see more..update soonish ne? :D ja!!!
    --ruby
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  • From ANON - Inuyasha_is_mine on June 14, 2006
    Kyaaa i lubb shikamaru!!!! *cuddles him* i so loved how you portrayed him in this story its freackin awesome! that is so how id see him in a few years ^^ you did a good job a bit OOC for kiba and shino but still..besides that i hope you finish this story it would please all of us..youre just too much of an awesome person not to! -.-..especially how well you make shika-kun seem and act and everything Dx...hope to see more in the near future ooo i so no his lazy ass will come to the conclusion that hes fallin for kiba..id never see him falling for neji thurr too smart for eachother haha..ja!
    --ruby
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 08, 2006
    Loved how you wrote this chapter and I really enjoyed how you started it :D. Everyone lovessss Temari!

    Can't really think of anything to say, but I guess it's still early so I'll use that as my excuse. Loved the chapter, great job and I hope you update soon! (man, that even sounds boring to me! :( )


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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 03, 2006
    That was really.. Really good! The battle scene was done very well! I have trouble with writing action bits but you make it seem very easy.

    The last part with Shikamaru's thoughts about death were really realistic, I think that if anyone was in his situation, or dying for that matter, they would be thinking the same thing.

    You're an awesome writer and I think you write the best Shikamaru I've ever read.

    And you left us with a killer ending - that was one hellava cliffhanger my friend. I'm on the edge of my seat and I'm afraid I will fall off soon and bash my head on the computer moniter and get a concussion so update soon!
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  • From ANON - monchy on June 03, 2006
    wahhh cliffhanger!!!! hmmm.... i think that shika will live, else its going to be a sad ending. hmmmmm..... hope to update soon.
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  • From ANON - Q on June 02, 2006
    YAY!!! I know, i'm a bad reader for not reviewing earlier, but i just got done reading the recent update! YAY!!! please continue! Kiba is my favourite character and shikamaru is pretty close but i never thought of them together...well anyway, keep rockin' it!
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  • From ANON - funnyboy1 on May 31, 2006
    man that was frikkin awesome and i really hope kiba dumps shino and goes with shika and shika stops acting like an idiot and just follow what he feels inside even he doesn't what he feels inside because he "conflicted" lol but anyway hope it turns out in the favor shikaxkiba
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