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Reviews for Hell in Your Eyes

By : Deathbyshuriken
  • From ANON - Mukki on October 02, 2006
    Very well written. You are a talented author. Major kudos to you, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - bitch on June 10, 2006
    what was that.! Hey has any one else wondered why the author puts that warning that says this mentions shonenai which encouners boy and boy relationspips. We know that how else would we find the stories.x.x That story was good but how could you do that to my NARUTO you b!@#~
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 26, 2006
    Very good. I'm not much for non-con, but this was so well written that I was drawn in, and I couldn't stop reading. It was just...wow. I can't think of anything else to say.
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  • From ANON - xerxes on May 01, 2006
    very nice. i always enjoy rape scenes, but your's was particularly great.
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  • From ANON - Linku on April 25, 2006
    I was the one that requested this on Aarinfantasy. Hey, Death. Thanks again for writing the story. You are the best ^_^
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  • From ANON - Yola on April 16, 2006
    For a non-con PWP that was pretty enjoyable. It was very realistic, with Naruto feeling pain along with the pleasure, since I'm guessing that it's his first time, unlike many PWP where everything's pure pleasure and flowery words. The sense of realism makes your story very coherent and I like the length of the story. I also liked the small glimpse of what Naruto likes to do in his free time and his stand on the situation.

    I found a couple of grammar mistakes here and there, so I suggest getting a beta, and I would gladly point out the mistakes for you but I'm kinda busy at the moment, sorry. D: The mistakes weren't so balantly obvious that it outright makes reading hard so it's nothing to worry about. Other than that, it was very awesome and pretty hot. It would be cool if you make sequels to this, or prequels. Can't wait for your next fanfic. ;)
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  • From ANON - DontWorri ABout My name on April 11, 2006
    OMG! this fic was so damn good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! At first i thought it was a little shakey, but it was so full of angst and just pure yaoiness!!!!! You should definitly make more chapters!!!!

    P.S.: Not to sound rude or anything but the song at the top of the story is called "Slept So Long" and it's not by Korn, it's by Jay Gordon of Orgy....just thought you should know
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  • From ANON - raven on April 07, 2006
    I liked it.... A littel dark and freaky, is it only a one-shot... you could do more chapters. If you do i look forward to seeing them.
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