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By : crowincarnate
  • From ANON - Beatrix on November 24, 2006
    I see..Oh well...Shit does happen^^
    This is just getting better and better...
    I like Kyos attitude...*hugs*
    Now..Fuck up that wedding...!!


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  • From ANON - chelzi on November 23, 2006
    o~oh... so /that's/ what happened... when i got to chapter six, i was confused... oh well, now that i've figured it out, i'm pleased!! ^__^ great job, and i hope to see more soon!!~
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  • From ANON - Donedin on November 23, 2006
    GAA!! SOOOO glad you updated!! And you don't like how it's going so far?! I like it, I just want Neji and Gaara to get together! Well, can't wait for the next post!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Karmegas on November 21, 2006
    DOnt you dare do that. Are you sadistic? I hate when you guys do that. You got me this far into the story then you decide to redo it? ARRRGHHH!!! Well, if you must rewrite at least post all teh chapters. that'll make the wait and pain worthwhile. Please notify me when it's complete.
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  • From ANON - Beatrix on November 19, 2006
    Did i miss something?
    Gaara meet Neji...and what happened to those two?
    confusing......
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  • From ANON - Karmegas on November 19, 2006
    NOOOOOOOOOOO! there must be more. Please update soon. i like where this is going but there is still a lot you can do as a writer pretaining to your grammar and style. And yes, I know that this is a fun piece and everyone is entitled to formulating their own style, but for the record this is not a flame. So, I'm not saying you suck but rather that if you plan on ever doing this seriously, there are some things you need to work out. Had this been a stand alone piece with no anime affiliation then a lot of what's going on would be lost in translation (but that's why it's a fanfic, lol)One other major issue you have is your description, in fact most fanfic writers do this anyway, because they take for granted that the audience knows the characters and the show. Persons who don't will be confused especially if the characters are OOC. But this is irrelevant i suppose, since fanfiction's target market is fans or people who are at least familiar with the anime written about. Anyway, overall i liked your fanfic and I hope to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - chelzi on November 19, 2006
    okay... i can't decide if i like this or not. the plot line is interesting, but i'm bothered by all the random author's notes in the first few chapters. usually i can deal with them, but you have, like, eight in a chapter. it's a little irritating. especially the one where sasuke sang n'sync, but not really... that was just bizarre. it's not a bad fic, and i think i'll keep reading, if only to find out what happens, but i'll probably have some minor complaints in the future. keep it up, and you be improving soon!~
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on November 18, 2006
    Yay! The story, IT LIVES!!
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  • From ANON - Beatrix on November 14, 2006
    I hope for your own good that you havent stopped writing this...!
    I Love this...Neji and Gaara^^
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  • From ANON - Death? on November 12, 2006
    Ahhhh cliff-hanger..... THE HORROR...... Anyywayyyy I love the story and I cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - HourglassSand on October 10, 2006
    Oh, so cruel, so cruel! I want to see what happens next.
    I love Neji and Gaara. Especially Gaara. I would like to lick his face.
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  • From ANON - frizzy197 on October 05, 2006
    OMFG!!!!! write more.
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  • From ANON - Angel on September 21, 2006
    My God!!!! I love this story so much...keep up the good work...
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  • From ANON - DK on September 09, 2006
    Awesome! Just plainly awesome! I'm starting to tear up beacuse of the cliff hanger! Keep writing and update soon, ok?!
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on September 09, 2006
    I rather like this fic a lot. I don't usually go for Gaara/Neji fics but I was attracted to this one. Not that you've indicated that you wouldn't, but I would like it very much if you continued writing this fic. One thing though, there are a lot of grammatical errors and I was curious why you wouldn't have your co-author beta it for you. You have someone available so it wouldn't be a bad idea to use them.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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