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Reviews for Personal Assistant

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - honto perver on February 04, 2006
    what can i say? YAY. YAY. YAY.

    YAY.
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  • From ANON - sasuhina fan on February 04, 2006
    hinata's having erotic dreams!!! it's always the innocent girls that will surprise you best!!!

    you seem to have hinted that hinata may be attracted to kakashi in a way. is there a possibility for a kaka/hina/sasu threesome? kukukukukuku...

    i hope we'll be seeing some lemon real soon!!!

    also, please, pretty please write more stories starring hinata? it's rare to see fiction featuring hinata on this site. sakura stories (esp sasusaku, itasaku, narusaku, kakasaku) are a dime a dozen and they get a little old. but there's something about reading how shy and timid hinata gets seduced into going to bed with someone that makes everything so much fun!!!
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  • From ANON - sasuhina fan on February 04, 2006
    you have seriously made my day. there aren't enough sasuhina fics on this site!!!
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  • From ANON - somenobody on February 04, 2006
    a great in terms of sasuke/hinata fics. please continue and keep up the great work. question... are you going to be making any other sasuke/girl fics later?
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  • From ANON - Pastel on February 04, 2006
    Great story. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Ever Rin on February 03, 2006
    YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!! YOU MUST PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - yvie on February 02, 2006
    I really enjoyed this story. Especially Hinata kicking Sasuke right there, that was so funny.

    By the way, just some little things: you had some little grammer and spelling mistakes but nothing really big. However, you used Hinata-san and Sasuke-chan. The 'san' for Hinata would be alright because 'san' goes for everyone but 'chan' is usually used for girls. While it may be used for boys, it is rather rare that a father would call his son with a suffix at the end. It is not really done much and it would be very strange for Sasuke's father to call him Sasuke-chan because that's actually a very feminine way of addressing him, gay even in the homo sense of the word.

    There is just one more thing, I think somewhere Hinata called herself 'Hinata-san'. The 'san' and 'chan' and these kinds of suffix are for addressing others only, they are never used for oneself. For example, I would never say, "My name is yvie-san" because that's not correct.

    I liked this idea though, it is very interesting!
    Yvie
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  • From TripleS on January 31, 2006
    I can't wait to read more! this is awesome! I love it! I absolutely love it!
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  • From ANON - Waiting_Forever on January 31, 2006
    Yay for Sasuke/Hinata fanfics! There really should be more of them. Anyway, enjoying the story so far. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Mi-chan on January 31, 2006
    You MUST complete this. I love it. Hinata is the best. Please, Please, PLEASE more? *gives you an ice cream cone* Please?
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  • From ANON - Deja on January 31, 2006
    Awesome job man! Keep up the good work! Can't wait til' Ch.2
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