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Reviews for Down Boy

By : babyjam
  • From ANON - pookie on January 30, 2006
    Wow your writing style is... really really different..!!!!! o_O Reminds me of OO83, or AkaiTsume... both of whom I worship day and night, but you're fast joining them on my fav list ^^ Love the heavy sarcasm and Naru-chan's spaceyness..... totally suits him, he HAS to think like that because he's such a spontanous sort of person. WAAAAAAAI GIMME UR NEXT CHAPTER OR I WILL EAT YOUR BABY!!!!!!!!! You should be proud of yourself because the last time I reviewed a fic was two years ag (gasp!) but I couldnt resist!!!!!!1
    (inhales sharply) Sorry, all that laughing must have knocked something loose. Ill strop rambling now =)
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  • From ANON - rhianna on January 30, 2006
    Noooooooooooo you can't leave us hanging like that. You're evil and I hate youuuuuu!!!!!!!!

    Other than that, please accept this cookie of adoration and awe with my compliments.
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  • From ANON - sakya on January 30, 2006
    you can't end it like that! ;__; what happens after? *cries*
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  • From ANON - raina on January 30, 2006
    this story is so cute so far, u must continue!
    can't write any more coz i'm too busy laughing, hee..
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  • From ANON - rune on January 30, 2006
    Every sentence is a wise-ass remark...
    Naruto's just too funny weaving between unsuccessful angst and glee... so frustratingly cute! I feel so bad for him, but it's oh so satisfying to read....
    When is Naruto moving in with Sasuke? I demand it! More trouble bewing no doubt....
    Hehehehe I really like the intro, really has me panting for more~ more pwease~~~
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  • From Auroawinter on January 30, 2006
    This is awsome..couldnt stop laughing.. looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - PJ on January 30, 2006
    OMGWTFBBQHAHAHA
    ...that was hilarious, esp the measuring tape... i get the impression that sasuke's a big boy tho
    fucking classic
    please cont'! i'll feed you orange juice and oreos when u do!!!!!!! (note when, not if....) *salute*
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  • From ANON - lemonadedoll on January 30, 2006
    Hahahaahah, this is great! oh, poor little naruto! XD please write more!
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  • From ANON - Neome21 on January 30, 2006
    this was hilarious. I don't think anyone has captured Naruto's spacey-ness quite the same way that you did. I would be ecstatic if you decided to write more.
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  • From ANON - anon_girl on January 30, 2006
    omg i just loved that
    you got to update this soon roflmao
    i couldnt stop laughing at some bits...
    and i love the style u write.... the dialogue is sharp and edgy and the sarcasm and self-berating is done well..... for your first fic, it is awfully goood (it IS your first fic right, i didn't see anything else on your authors page?)
    most POV fics are straightforward and boring but you did well......!!
    eagerly awaiting next chapter.
    thx!
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  • From ANON - aura2124 on January 30, 2006
    I think I'm in love with you, and I'd gladly bear your children so MY offspring can carry your writing genes. I'm going to send you an email now and fangirl further ^^
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  • From ANON - ManChesterEngland on January 30, 2006
    this is really good. It's a great intro makes me beggin for more... which i shall do unashamedly.. MORE PLEASE MORE!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
    now on to more constructive stuff. i like how it's in Naruto's POV but i was wondering if u'r gonna switch it up or keep it the way it is. either way is fine but u know curiosity....
    Reeeaalllyyy weel done... i'm impressed!
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  • From ANON - fan on January 30, 2006
    I like it! A bit au, but the characters are still... well... naruto and sasuke. :) And Naruto really IS puppy dog cute. I look forward to the continuation!
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  • From ANON - edie on January 30, 2006
    I was actually a passerby and I wasn't going to review (I do like this fic tho, I do! I'm just not a reviewing kind of person....) but the quamp person is just too a) fucking funny b) fucking stupid because this IS a fanfiction community isn't it? I doubt the real maker of Naruto will ever come here or if he can even read and write English fluidly. You ARE stupid, quamp. Sorry, but you are making a huge fuss out of sth so obvious *shrug*
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  • From ANON - catnip on January 30, 2006
    Holy shit, that was great. My roommate just came in to find me chuckling evilly at the screen and ran out of my room screaming.
    That's exactly how I pictured the way Naruto would think for any fic is written in his POV, all the black humor and sarcasm and self denial while admitting to himself he finds Sasuke teme a uberhottie instead of fawning all over him like most SasuNaru fics do.
    Congrats, you have captured yourself a fan... ^_~
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