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Reviews for The Fire Within

By : loche606
  • From ANON - blisblop on August 23, 2006
    Ohhhh.Very good.I reaaaaaaaally like this,Kyubbi(shit damn lost my brain here!)is a little blood thirsty eh.Well he will snap its not only naruto's decicion eh?
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  • From ANON - xBunni on August 18, 2006
    Maaa!! Ren-san!!! OO Please uppy soon ne~? *sobs* It's sad na no da~ Demo, I hope naru-chan is going to be the only uke.. *hint hint* ^^ Ja, gambatte ne~!! I'll be waiting for the next chappy!!
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  • From ANON - Houseki on August 15, 2006
    Hot damn! Naruto was vicious to Sasuke! Poor Sasuke-kuuun!!! T__T hehe besides that, it was hella hot...man sounds like Sasuke lost a hella lot of blood man! And Naruto coming to, at the end, poor thing. Now what's going to happen? He needs to get Kyuubi under control so he and Sasuke can mate...not Sasuke and the Kyuubi :p

    Love ya always!

    Me
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  • From ladygizarme on August 15, 2006
    *superglomp* omt, sooooooooo hot! like whoa, naruto got really freaky.. that was awesome.. one of my favorite parts was: Sasuke was having a hard time breathing. He couldn’t tell if he liked it or not. If he went by his erection, that was throbbing between them, then he did, but his brain was still racing.

    yes.. so great.. but the ending w/the note was sad.. PLLLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSEEEE write the next one soon! *dinner plate-sized pooly eyes*

    ~ crys
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  • From ANON - blue_genjutsu on June 27, 2006
    I'd say that was Kyuubi and not Naruto that is clawing at Sasuke's window! Can't tell if Sasuke understands the difference. :)

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  • From ANON - blue_genjutsu on June 27, 2006
    I'd say that was Kyuubi and not Naruto that is clawing at Sasuke's window! Can't tell if Sasuke understands the difference. :)

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  • From ANON - Psylocke on June 25, 2006
    Gah!!! You can't just leave it like that!! (hates all cliffhangers with a passion, lol)

    Hooray for Kyuubi!NaruSasu!! XD will we see more of that? As well as some of "ordinary" NaruSasu? :3
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  • From ANON - Houseki on June 24, 2006
    Damn dood...Naruto hit a vain or something?? lol and you brought out the lust-filled kyuubi on sasuke?? what'd he ever do to you? :p anyways...sounding good...can't wait to see what happens next. dominate naru is hot..but not with kyuubi in control...although a scared uke sasuke is really hot too...damn i can't decide!! nya..you decide then :p ^___~

    love ya

    ~Tsuma *haha*
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  • From ANON - Rei on June 24, 2006
    EEEEVVVVIIIIILLL!

    keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on June 24, 2006
    nyaaaa ren! you are so sadistic!! but i love that about you! XD evil EVIL cliffie again too! oh my, how i love bloody sasuke.. and that he was turned on by it too! mmmm yummm ..wtf is wrong w/me??!! XP XP well you KNOW you HAVE to write more of this SOON, ne?? ne??!! onegai?? *purrs w/puppy eyes* :p

    love ya
    ~ lg
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on June 23, 2006
    XD!!!!!!! What a great way to end a chapter! Thank you and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ol on June 22, 2006
    fun
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on June 22, 2006
    dats soooo cute!
    i love how yooh ended chap 3~
    cute cute (-^^-)
    keep up the great work by giving us chap 4 soon!
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  • From ANON - Houseki on June 22, 2006
    hehe sweetness dood...you pulled a me when I first started writing BP..two chaps in one day. coolzies ^__^ Yeah..we have been in a heavy Naru-mood as of late, ne? We've been watchin the shit out of it...glad you wrote this on your day off...hope you continue it too...it's really cute. and wow dood...was that a hint of dominate naru?? hawtnessssssss!!!!!! hehe *does nice guy pose* ^___^V *and eiji pose hahahaha*

    love ya

    General
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on June 22, 2006
    yes, yes, write more. i like how blunt your boys are, there's no real messing around. don't worry so much about getting to the boot-eh. i'm pretty content with how things are going, i actually kind of liked that sasuke told naruto to go home. i was like hmm... but then i was like good boy! it made it even hot. so... did you write another chapter yet? stop reading this and write! hehe
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