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By : TailofKyuubi
  • From Inuzuka on January 29, 2006
    Wartime, eh? Is it with Oto, and if so, have they grown that much? It seems that Orochimaru is leading a large number of nin against them...also, have they gotten past the gates, because it seems odd to me that ninja would battle so blatantly...curious about that.

    I really like it. Naruto's grown up, and even if Sasuke does act a bit odd, he's exhausted and it's an awkward moment, so it's not OOC at all. Keep going with this, please! It has a lot of potential, and you did a really good job with this chapter. I have some very morbid imagery in my head from it, too, and that's always good. :p
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  • From ANON - Vox on January 29, 2006
    Virus? sounds interesting... Oro/sasu O.o bleh.
    Please tell me its not consensual. *shudders*
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  • From ANON - Vox on January 29, 2006
    Virus? sounds interesting... but oro/sasu O.o bleh.
    please tell me it's not consensual. *shudders*
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  • From ANON - Kiki on January 29, 2006
    Great first chapter!! when are u going to post more?

    will be looking for the follow-up chapters egarly!
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