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Reviews for Silent Observer

By : Cepheus
  • From Demoninmysoul on August 16, 2012
    Oh, wow! I love the story! The characters, their behaviour and thinking patterns, the story structure so far, and the mood of the story. Ummm... Will you continue it? I hope you wil...
    I want so much to happen, and I'm really curious of how you'd write the whole story, but I won't start listing everything.

    Thanks for writing and sharing it!
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  • From hsosborne on April 03, 2009
    great fic! I wonder when/what will knock naruto out of this "never enough" mindset he's got now. I can see him going and traing with the local tean and blowing them out of the water and either getting reality or thinking again "too easy going: like you said with the chuunin exam
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  • From on March 01, 2008
    hope you ad more to this soon. it is a good story but you have not got to them meeting yet. keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - allthethingsyourefusetosay on July 02, 2007
    i love this pairing few people ever put shika and naru together
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  • From MasterofPie on April 19, 2007
    is there going to be more ?? I love it so far - though i want to see the ShikaNaru pairing !! Poor naruto - to wrapped up in his own little world to notice things
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  • From ANON - Zigana on February 14, 2007
    More! Please! What happens next? Do they find him? Is Michiko really okay or is he part of the Akatsuki? This inquiring mind really needs to know.
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  • From ANON - AutoSound on November 01, 2006
    ShikaNaru is pretty hard to come by and this fic is pretty good, which is bad for you because i'm officially demanding more, and i have a pack of rabid hamsters that can be pretty persuasive.
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  • From ANON - lazykunoichi on September 06, 2006
    I can't really go and judge this particular Oc character by just one introduction, after in your winter release you have an Oc as the Akatsuki leader and that man is just too cool for words, so yes I will give this new kid a chance. As for the rest of the chapter...Well I really like the fact that Jiraiya's thoughts were shown a bit more than usual. Another part I really enjoyed was finally having Sasuke use his brain for once...I mean I think many of us ut there believe that the Uchiha was a corrupt clan in a lot of ways any way. And I also think that many of us can agree that when it comes to Itachi..there's more to him then meets the eye. Of course you've already delved into a lot of that with you other story...but this isn't about that. Any way can't wait too see more Shikamaru action... he's such a awesome character in a his LAZY Glory and as I'm sure you've probably figured out I really like the way in which you write him. In fact there is only one other writer that stands out in mind mind when it comes to Shikamaru...but never mind that/

    Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - SilentInquisition on August 08, 2006
    hiya! I must say that you do a lot better about writing in English than most other foreign people I've seen on the site. You could still use a beta though, some of your phrasing is a little awkward and there could be better word choices in some areas...for example Shino's coat is high collared, not a turtleneck. Finally, Mizu no Kuni is Water Country. Rain is one of the hidden villages, and there are a couple more you didn't mention like Hidden Grass and Hidden Waterfall. I have no idea what countries they correspond to though. And before you get a chance to get all indignant about the inaccuracy of English dubs, I watched Naruto subbed.
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  • From AmberRose on August 07, 2006
    really great story! i love it when i can really get involved with the characters. smut + great plot + great writing = (^_^) eagerly awaiting the next chaper!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on August 07, 2006
    YATTA! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Cloudy on August 01, 2006
    DANG IT!!!

    Why is all the rare pairings don't have many chapters done? These are like the best and GAH!!!

    GAH!!!

    Is all I have to say

    -__-
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  • From ANON - princessgolux on June 30, 2006
    Wow. This is fun. I have a couple of things, first a minor grip and then some major praise. Teeny-tiny gripe - Sannin means "Three Ninjas", Sennin means "hermit" Jiraiya is the Gama Sennin, the Toad Hermit. Neither Tsunade nor Ororchamaru are Sennin, they're Sannin, part of the legendary Three Ninjas. So very, very many people don't pick that up, so don't worry about it. It's just a pet peeve of mine. :) Major praise!!! I love your characterizations!! I think you've pegged Shikamaru and the rest perfectly. For what it's worth, I don't think your Sasuke is OOC, I think he's in the exact head-space he'd be in if he'd come back. You're also one of the few fic writers who has not only picked up on the fact that none of the kids knows about the Kyuubi, but has used that fact dramatically, to deepen the characterization and the plot, and not just thrown the revelation away. And oh, man! I love, love LOVE your Shino!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Mel on June 15, 2006
    OMG....I love this story!!! Especially the whole Naruto/Shikamaru pairing....there aren't alot of them out there. I hope I see another chapter soon....I've grown quite addicted to this story **smiles** It rocks....keep up the good work.
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  • From Auroawinter on June 14, 2006
    Bwahaha I have found you .. hehe just kidding. ^.~

    Wonderful job on the story so far, cant wait to read more.. I've only seen a few stories with the shika/naru pairing and only one of those was really worth reading ( I think it was fading scars.. had neji/sasu pairing too.. to many stories to remember them all hehe) .. but this one definitly has potential.. loving the build up and all ^_^ I look forward to see where ya take it ^_^

    Ja ne
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