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Reviews for Silent Observer

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Stormraven on March 15, 2006
    Hi! I love your fic! Great plot, good writing style and love the characterizations. I adore the Shika/Naru pairing since I don't see it that often and they are sooo HOT together. Crying shame that there aren't enough fics about them as a couple. I really enjoy the story and hope to see more in the future!
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  • From ANON - blue_genjutsu on March 11, 2006
    Yay a ShikaNaru fic! Great so far! :)

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  • From ANON - Death.by.shurikens on February 06, 2006
    hmm... I'm gonna keep on going with this because you're setting this up nicely. Just a note; watch your sentence structure. It gets a little awkward at moments. You tend to switch adverbs and verbs around. But! Your story is awesome. :) I like.
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  • From ANON - Aurora on February 06, 2006
    As long as the story is still Naruto/Shika I think it would be cool to put Sasuke in there....I don't know about Itachi though putting him in there as anything is good to me. I luv the way you've characterized (is that a word?) Shikamaru in this story.....I am anxious to see how he acts on a mission....luvin' the story
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  • From ANON - osvark on February 05, 2006
    I think adding sasuke would be interesting to the story, especially if you are making a narushika pair. It would help stir things up and make more interesting dialogue as well as give you a chance to show how different sasuke's character has become since he was brought back. Sasuke also seems to need some more training and wants to test himself against naruto again, so it would be the perfect oppertunity. Adding Kiba or would be interesting as well, but the most important people (Shika, Sasuke, and Neji) are already on the team so I'm sure whoever else is choosen to join will work out. If it would be interesting if gaara joined but I don't know if that'll fit with the story or if you're planning on them meeting later on. Anyways, good story so far, i'm interested in reading more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mahsell on February 03, 2006
    Itachi–kun innocent but still dark

    This fic is so awesome. I can hardly
    wait for the next chapter. I love all the
    angst, and well I just love it.

    Mashell
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on February 03, 2006
    hiya. just here to say i love your story sooooooo much. the plot is great and the characters are in character. and as for the whole itachi thing, once evil now redeemed. a good itachi is always better than a bad one.

    anywho, love your story and i can't wait for the next update^_^V
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  • From ANON - hinshihoushi on February 03, 2006
    Yes I definitely enjoyed this chapter too. Hope you had a chance to read that other story and liked it. my name cam from a site regardin miroku from inuyasha (had something to do regarding perverted monks). If you want a good site to check out technique names, character, translated manga, Nartuofan . com (minus spaces of course) is a great source.
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  • From ANON - mokoshna on February 02, 2006
    Well, that's a rather unexpected pairing, but I liked it ^^.
    You didn't rush in, that's good; I like pairings that take their time to florish.
    Please continue !
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  • From ANON - Soul of Emerald on February 01, 2006
    Woaaa... such a nice written prologue of a promising story :)

    I'm a sucker for rare pairings (in all fandoms) and I haven't read a ShikaNaru story before, and this story of yours have caught my interest! I would like to see how their relationship develops. As I said before, this part was very well written and you kept everyone in character (I don't think Sasuke was that much OOC, it was needed)

    I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

    Ta ta for now!

    Soul of Emerald~
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  • From Deathbyshuriken on January 31, 2006
    cute. I liked it. :) So, where are we going with this? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - kallipso on January 30, 2006
    To troublesome. You better update.
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  • From ANON - aurora on January 30, 2006
    I liked the story please keep writing I love pairings you don't see everyday.
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  • From ANON - I.S.S. on January 29, 2006
    Yay! I love Shikanaru! You are my hero (tries to tackle you)

    (coughs) Ahem, anyways. This was a really well-written fic and the characters were pretty in-character. I hope you update soon...

    I'll give you a cookie.


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  • From ANON - Lanier on January 29, 2006
    That was a great chapter. I feel bad for poor Naruto. He worked so hard and Sakura is such a meanie that she couldnt even come see how he was. Sometimes I really hate her! I cant wait for the next chapter.
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