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Reviews for Whoosh

By : DevilLived
  • From ANON - Reemu-Chan (not signed in) on September 16, 2006
    *Dies of laugther* Something like that would happen to Sasuke if Naruto was around XD

    Kudo ^-^

    ~Ria ^.~
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  • From ANON - Kira on January 29, 2006
    omg! that is hallarious! *steals seventh comment virganity* im goig to have to read the other story~ ^^:
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  • From ANON - Keishiki-Dono on January 29, 2006
    Huh?.....That's it?......What the hell was the point of that? They fall off a cliff and suddenly that's the end of the fic? That little bit doesn't even qualify as a full One-Shot. No offense but you need to put more thought into developing your plots or add some more chapters. Lack of plot is acceptable in PWP's, which this clearly not the case, but your warning included mild Shounen-ai but as with other points I made, your claim was found lacking. However, to your credit, I found relatively few grammatical and spelling errors. In the future I hope you put more effort into your fics.
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  • From Reyn on January 27, 2006
    LoL. That was cute. I especially like how you started and ended it on the same word. Hey! You should do a series of oneshots like that! It'd be like your own personal challenge!!
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  • From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on January 26, 2006
    random...

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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on January 26, 2006
    That was cute (^-^)v
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  • From ANON - Phix on January 26, 2006
    Oh my god. I loved that. Lol~ After a hard night's work of homework reading that just made me burst out into laughter. I have this complete inability to write humour as well as anything shorter than 4000 words, which is what makes me really envious and respectful of you guys who can write drabbles. Just one small error. It should be 'coal black', if I got your meaning right.

    As for the storyline, I hope you leave it just as it is. It's lovely!

    Hoping to read more from you and thanks for the magic!
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  • From ANON - Inuchi on January 26, 2006
    And? and?! what happens next? more maybe? this could be some thing good! is it a deathly fall to their death? lol what happens next!!! i must kno!!! XDDD
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