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Reviews for Lonely Heart Beats

By : Kitsune
  • From mrsdmcullen on October 26, 2016

    This was an awesome story. I love the take you had on why Naruto is the way he is. Please write more! I'm looking forward to an update. 


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  • From ANON - Sabrina on August 24, 2006
    I've never reviewed any stories on aff before, but I had to with this one. I've read many fanfictions before, but yours is one of the best written and beautiful. Very dark and complex. PLEASE continue with it!
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on January 30, 2006
    poor naruto, i hope sasuke comes in the next chapter to make him feel better. Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - mar on January 29, 2006
    wow, i looove this story!! u made me soo curious as to what sasuke's gunna do to win naruto's trust and stuff... please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sophade on January 29, 2006
    oh my...

    how can you do this to Naruto and Sasuke?? *cry* I never thought that someone could be so cruel... that's... horrible...


    You are an excellent writter, but this?? WHY?? they don't deserve this! this poor Naruto! I almost cry as a read you fiction! Oh my! It's TOO sad!, I think I'm going to take a col shower and search for an other fic which can lift up my moral... Argh, I think I'm crying now! *cry*

    well, if you write something else tell me, but not if its soo cruel with the two of them...

    anyway *cry*

    goodbye *sob*
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  • From ANON - CryBaby Usagi on January 29, 2006
    OMG! it's so sad *cries*
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on January 28, 2006
    Sugoi! What an interesting story. I enjoy the first chapter, really long, I like it and I really like the way Naruto how his life was hard. It makes me feel so bad for him. Your story is really well written and beautiful even if it's sad. Unfortunately for me, chapter two was short but I really like it too, so I'm not complainning. Naruto's dream was really realistic and sad and full of blood but I totally enjoy it! I hope to see more onegai, this is a great story that you're doing, so please keep writing and I hope people will review your story, I want longer chapter! Keep doing your excellent work! Ja! ST
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  • From ANON - dakara on January 28, 2006
    omg...if you leave this as a one shot I will come home to you and torture you in all possible ways..so don't..!
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  • From Auroawinter on January 28, 2006
    I really enjoyed this, I hope there will be another chapter..I wanna know what happens **pouts...stomps feet**
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  • From ANON - Kerrisa on January 27, 2006
    CONTINUE IT CONTINUE IT CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T I'LL EMAIL YOU REPEATEDLY BEGGING YOU TO DO SO!!! Lol but in all sincereity your story is wonderous, please dont end it here! I haven't a fic that has take quite this angle before so i'm holding it to you to see your fic through to the end ^_~ You wouldn't let someone whi adores your work down would you? o.o *puppy eyes* Lol I'll even try to help you out with it! I'mma offerin to be your own personal BETA ^ ^ Lol think about it =D You got my email addy so when ya can let me know whats up ^ ^ i really did enjoy this first chapter, you got me sad! Not nice! but then again.. it was >_>.. as far as plot development goes, lol so keep up the good work! I swear i will result to drastic measures if you don't continue this story!!!! *Walks away wondering what in the world she could do that qualified as a 'drastic measure*.. I think I'm screwed in that department... Tehehe Ja ne!! Always, Kerrisa, aka Lil_Kitsune
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  • From ANON - KasumiMiniko on January 26, 2006
    DON'T YOU DARE LEAVE THE STORY ENDING THERE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE IT'S REALLY GREAT!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - diamond_princess2006 on January 26, 2006
    I have so many reasons why you should continue this fic but since i'm too lazy to type them all out i'll just settle for a PLEASE CONTINUE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    oh and one more thing... i'm glad sasuke told sakura off like that i think she deserved it ! i was rooting for him to just kill her but i think his words hurt her more than any weapon
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  • From chinohana on January 26, 2006
    i cried. the whole time. but still i want an update! as, i am sure, does everyone else! and if they don't, i will call forth all my alter-egos!!!
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  • From amy44 on January 26, 2006
    Congratulations on the commencement of your first yaoi fanfic. I think you're doing a great job. I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. I am looking forward to seeing what Sasuke is going to do and what will happen with training the next day, ooh and the mission. I'm also curious to see how Sakura is going to act with this new knowledge and her status of being 'dead' to Sasuke. There were a couple of points when I wanted to cry, but alas I don't cry too easily. I liked the stories about his scars etc. I think that it is the little details that make a good story. I appreciate how you give the stories a affect on Naruto's life. Instead of just going, yeah he gets attacked and thrown in a river to die, you put that it made him apprehensive to water and getting on the boat in Wave Country. It gives the explanations more presense. For some twisted reason I am a massive fan of stories where Naruto is tortured in one way or another. I think it makes the good things that happen to him more rewarding to read. In some weird way I guess.

    This is definately a fave story now. Hope to see the second chapter as soon as you can release it.
    xoxox shadow
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