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Reviews for Encounters

By : BT1
  • From Shadi88 on April 26, 2008
    It's a great story, I absolutly loved it.
    Best wishes and good luck.
    Butterfly Beauty
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  • From oohshiny on November 19, 2007
    DAMMIT kinda cliffy? its a common way to end sumthin but its still annoying as hell. moving along, i request a notification email whenever you update this fanfic. my email is deannathx@comcast.net. if you don't update ill knock you upside your head.
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  • From ANON - inuyashalove on January 12, 2007
    I love you story. I'm usually not an Itachi and anyone fan; but your story is awsome. I like the female characters attitude...especially when she and Kisami argue. I can't wait to read more...if there is more.
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  • From ANON - Emma on November 29, 2006
    Mary Sue is *never* a good thing, sorry.
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  • From ANON - me on November 01, 2006
    why dont you update? its a really goos story so far
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  • From ANON - Airayle on September 15, 2006
    I loved the story so far just curious wot the girls real name is LOL
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  • From ANON - Bootleg on January 31, 2006
    Whoa this was the most awesome and enticing story i have ever read!!! Please keep up the work i am waiting to read on.
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  • From ANON - Dark Lullaby on January 31, 2006
    Two words. And it isn't 'good job'. MARY SUE.
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  • From ANON - madge snow on January 28, 2006
    Black Tiger; I've read your first chapter and found myself feeling as if i am in this moment. It is A compelling read and look forward to chapter two. Once I've become accustomed to reading the japenese words the literature will be even more enticing.As for your work... you should be proud of this work you have done.bravo to you.For a young developing writer you certainly know how to put words together to captivate audiences into this genra or causerie
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  • From ANON - Watching Out on January 22, 2006
    My friend and I got a 93, without knowing most of the answers (and skipping those), and basing it solely off the first half of your first chapter.

    Try taking the test yourself, and make a decision later: http://www.angelfire.com/gundam/otto/grayswandir/mary-sue-test.html

    Also try reading the wikipedia article on Sues, notably the "typical sues" section. Original characters, as a whole, are fine, but they need to be kept "in their place." People read fanfiction to see the characters the know and love grow and develop, not to discover an endless litany of a perfect person who fell into their world. Original characters should help the plot, not BE the plot. This should help in the future: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Sue
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  • From ANON - Olive Oil on January 22, 2006
    Great story! I love the detail. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kasai on January 22, 2006
    You encounters story is awesome.
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  • From ANON - Uchiha Sayuri on January 22, 2006
    That was awesome!!!!!!!!!!
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