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By : Inuzuka
  • From ANON - claire on January 23, 2006
    update soon! i think this is great!
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  • From ANON - Emmy on January 22, 2006
    I completely agree with the review thing, it's crazy isn't it? Before you start writing, it seems like reviews aren't that big a deal. But once you become a writer, it just blows you away how much one review can mean. I'm writing my first story, and even a simple "Good job, update soon!" can lift my spirits. Nobody but a writer knows how much a review means, ever since I started my first fic, I review every story I come across.

    This is a really good story, my favorite thing is the interaction between Naruto and the Kyuubi. It's hilarious, and done very well, and it makes me feel sorry for poor Naruto! What a little perv that Kyuubi is, heh. I feel kinda sorry for Sasuke, since his whole manor is gone, but it has put things into perspective for him. And now he gets to stay with Naruto...can we say sexual tension?? woot! :P I can't wait until the next chapter, you're doing such a wonderful job here!
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  • From ANON - Zane on January 22, 2006
    i luv this story! and i like how u move between Sasuke and Naruto's POV. And a thought...is either Naruto or Sasuke going to walk in on Kiba and Kankurou cause that would be hot and halarious, anyway just a thought. I can't wait for your update!


    Your newest friend, Zane.
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  • From ANON - Kurama Crazy on January 22, 2006
    Wow! this is really good, I love it. Keep up the good work^_^
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on January 22, 2006
    I like it so please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ (but I kind of wanted Naruto and Gaara to be more then friends *pouts*)

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - Nathaniel on January 22, 2006
    Hello!

    After reading the second chapter I think I'm ready to review. The story progresses well and the character are described and developed well.
    I also think your style has become plainer and easier to read. In the first chapter I have a lot of trouble to follow your every thought. Too much excursive thinking without nearer explanation made it hard for me to grasp what you have meant. In the end I somewhat lost the plot.

    But if you keep writing the way you did in chapter two, I think this fic is going to be awesome.

    So long,
    Nathaniel
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 22, 2006
    omg I am sooo loving this fic so far, love the way you have them thinking of each other and the way they were both scared and then how naru was all mad at Hokage for making Sasu sleep on the street...awwww and the reunion, I thought you would make it all, I dont know hard for them to talk or something, but I love the way you had naru tackling him and all then offering him to come home with him, and Sasu not having nightmares anymore, loving it cause I can picture it in my head and although Naru should be mad, the way Ive read the Manga so far shows me that naru never gives up on Sasu, even though he might later, have yet to get past 290 so ya dont know if it will change but i can see naru happy to have Sasu finally back and not wanting him to leave..adorable fic, love it cant wait for more and I thank you for a wonderful read, have been denied my internet access till my phone gets hooked up at the end of the month so am have withdrawels of Sasu/Naru goodness and love reading this, so had to leave a review, again hope to read an update soon, end of the month almost here and will have my access back...sighs with happiness...lol..good work, till next chapter much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - mE on January 22, 2006
    Hi. I was just wondering which one will be on top on their firts time. Because I love sasunaru (I know this is Sasunarusasu or someting :D) and it'd be great if on their first time it'd be sasuke on top. But it's your call. Your story is very interestin and two chaps in two days is really good.. I cant wrote my own 'cause my visison of blocked for the moment. But keep up the goog work, ne? :D
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  • From ANON - liankitty on January 21, 2006
    This was a very nice read; a good length and well sculpted. The dialogue was good and the character interactions were very cute and funny. I just hope Naruto doesn't become a simpering love-struck fool; that's really tedious.
    Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this; I hope to see more!
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  • From ANON - HydeCrazy on January 21, 2006
    OMG!!! OMG! i loved it!!

    i am waitinig for the next chapter! oh and is it NarutoXSasuke or SasukeXNaruto...nyah

    anyways i loved it and i hope u will update soon!!
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  • From ANON - RyuichiSakuma2 on January 21, 2006
    It's good. ^___^
    More, more!

    -Ryu
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on January 20, 2006
    Great job. First story or not, I'm loving it. Naruto's changed, Sasuke's back and the different way you're protraying everything is great. I was getting tired of the wimpy!Naruto, or the Naruto who had been a super genius from the start and never showed it. Everything was gradual and the process of growing up. Sasuke's not a super wimp either and yet it's obvious that he's changed. Perfect. And Kabuto was evil, but only partly evil, so all the better. I'm still a little pissed off that he turned out so evil when I liked him so much. I can't wait for the Uchiha/Uzumaki confrontation. If all of your chapters are like this one, you're going to have a wonderful story on your hands.
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  • From sonicphotonic on January 20, 2006
    Ooh! This story is awesome! Please continue adding onto it! :3
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