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By : Inuzuka
  • From ANON - chimerical on January 29, 2006
    Ooo! Fighting! I can't wait to see how Naruto has progressed... and Sasuke and Sai need to try to outdo one another. Bad boy rivalry!

    Very good so far.
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on January 29, 2006
    Soooooooooo cool ^^ !!!!!!!!!!! Want more!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - spikemyangel on January 25, 2006
    i like the fic so far, & i'm 1/2 through with chapter 2, but i had to stop, because omfg, you say "noone" SO many times!!!!!! it's not a word!! for the love of fanfic, separate them! no one. see, not hard. I often have the urge to smush words together, but on cases like this where it is horribly horribly wrong & inaccurate, resist that urge. kinda like 'alot' - not a word. 'noone'...so painful....can you not see how awful that is? i'm cringing right now. but other than that, yay you!
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on January 25, 2006
    Yeah! Sai! You're right that they're really not that much alike, but with the whole black hair, black eyes, somewhat feminine features (not much though) AND the way they love to piss off Naruto... They do have quite a BIT in common.

    Naruto and Sasuke are so gay. There have been hints upon HINTS throughout the manga AND the anime. The KISS, Ops 5/6, how they act around each other, Naruto's need to get Sasuke back, and he said that Sasuke was better looking than Sai. The translation for CH 291 came out yesteday and Naruto blows up with Kyuubi!chakra in Orochimaru's face, saying, "HE'S NOT YOURS! NEVER IN MY PRESENCE SPEAK AS IF SASUKE BELONGS TO YOU!" Yeah, possessive Naruto, definitely.

    Plot production is good. Kakashi shows up and Naruto forces him to leave so that he doesn't bother/upset Sasuke. Like he wants someone to scare Sasuke away again. I like how they are starting to act like they used to around each other, falling back into the familiarity, but their thoughts are so different that they can't help but feel awkward. It's 'cute'. And yes, Sai does have a strange fixation on Naruto's penis. Sasuke might have to cut off some hands. How will they have Sasuke show off how much he has improved, will they make him fight someone? Don't worry, I think this chapter came out well, because even wih the lack off the sterotypical things that we love, no story would survive without chapters like these to push it along. And when it does come down to 'sex', how will they handle it? Both of them obviously have had traumatic experiences with this, so how will they be able to feel comfortable around each other to get to it. Or will it just HAPPEN and the fall out come after?
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  • From ANON - Zane on January 25, 2006
    EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!! *points accusing finger* HOW COULD YOU!!!!? THEY WERE SO CLOSE!!!!!!!!!! *huddles in a corner and cries* WAI!!!! YOUR SO MEAN!!!!!!! *jumps into the story and kills the ANBU person* DIE!!!!! *then turns to Sasuke and Naruto* You didn't see anything *then jumps out of the story and into the night laughing like a crazy woman* Can't wait till your update!!!


    Your friend, Zane.
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  • From ANON - HydeCrazy on January 25, 2006
    *narrows eyes* why you...*shaking fists* TEME!!! it was sooooooooooooooooo mean to stop it there PLUS ruin their kiss!!! who can resist a wet Sasuke?!! WHO?!?!! the Anbu that got in the way should die!

    And yeah...you are a bastard *grins sheepishly*
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  • From ANON - claire on January 25, 2006
    YOu should add in MOre of Sai-kun in it hahhaha! just to make Sasu-chan jealous XD, btw it is called "JOUNIN" not jonin just to let u know
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  • From ANON - DragonDame57 on January 25, 2006
    omgsh.. this is the first sai and sasuke encounter i've read.. AND IT'S INCREDIBLE! i hope it happens again... and i want to see jealous sasuke ^^

    update soon! i like it~
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  • From ANON - Emmy on January 24, 2006
    Good chapter! I think you have a great pace going here, it's refreshing when there is tension and uncertainty, rather than them automatically making out. Not that there's anything wrong with that...lol, but it's good to see a steady progression as well. I love that you put in Sai! What a groping little bastard! Heh, I hope to see more of him, maybe a rivalry between him and Sasuke? That would be awesome!! Ooh, and so many possibilities of Sasuke getting the wrong idea and kicking Sai's ass! Yeah! Ok, getting carried away now, sorry! I just really love this story, and all the directions it can take from here. I can't wait to read the next chapter, really great stuff so far!
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on January 24, 2006
    What a wonderful story! This is really well written and the plot is quite interesting. Hope to see more of your work, because it's a good story. Happy to know that Sai had his jaw broken 4 times. I really don't like him, even if he new in the manga, he really piss me of. Anyway, I'll be looking for your next update and continue your great job. Ja! ST
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on January 24, 2006
    That was nice and I can't wait to see what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - Billy on January 24, 2006
    Hey!
    Love the story!!!
    I think that one has to be uke at some point.
    They can switch off but whatever fits the mood makes the seme and the uke...
    Continue lots and lots.!!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on January 23, 2006
    Yes, the boys have definitely grown up. Ya know, Naruto's reaction is very funny because he isn't the kind of person to hold a grudge and yet his brash side of his younger years would have tried to beat the shit out of Sasuke and THEN forgive him with open arms. Shows how they can change. Sasuke's lost, not sure how to react or to behave in a place that's so different and yet so much like it used to be. I feel for both of them. Are you going to give Sai a larger role, or at least throw him in somewhere? I'm kinda curious as to how Sasuke would react to someone that's a little too much like the Uchiha for comfort.

    Yeah, I love how Kabuto was kinda a spy/traitor, but then you find out that he was playing Akatsuki for Orochimaru. Damn, if that guy isn't sexy when he's bad. Will Sasuke ever come back? I miss him so.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing great.
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  • From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on January 23, 2006
    I love these kind of stories when Sasuke comes back! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - HydeCrazy on January 23, 2006
    GYAH!! i loved it! but no kissie kiss?! EVIL!! *points an accusing finger*
    can;t wait for the next chapter! update soon!
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