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By : mischiefmaker
  • From ANON - Laurie on September 11, 2011
    I have enjoyed it so far. Hope that you will finish it. I am a BIG Kakashi and Sakura fan. Can't wait to read the rest.
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  • From tillean on October 05, 2008
    I know that you haven't worked on this in a long time, but is there any chance that you'll finish it? I really want to continue reading!
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  • From Breek on December 09, 2007
    oooh, very nice. More soon? this is absolutely and tunnel-vision level intriguing.
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  • From FlameTwirler on January 20, 2007
    dude, i freakin love this story. (haha, sorry, i was just reading something else very 'valley-esque.') I hope you pick this back up now that you're done with Wet Nightmare. This has definitely got an interesting twist on the KakaSaku plot and I like where you're taking it. It'll be fun to see how you actually get Sakura to break down and ask the man (unless - and i don't really see this happening, but hey, not my story - he takes pity and comes out of his emotionally stunted shell and offers? haha), not to mention his accepting. Oooh, the ensuing mayhem. Definitely a chuckle to read so far.
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  • From ANON - Rashaka on November 09, 2006
    Where's the next chapter? I'd love to read more-- I was a little skeptical in the beginning but I really like how you're taking the story so far. Surprisingly good approach to Sakura's characterization in a situation like this, which is pretty hard to imagine for her. The stuff with Kakashi so far has been execellent (although I can't really see her getting drunk that way, I understand the plot device it served), especially with his frankness and then checking up on her. The reasoning surrounding her potential attraction to him is sound, too. I also liked the Kiba stuff; he was a good character choice for her first attempt, and you wrote the scene believably.

    This fanfic is a delight-- much better so far than most of the fic on this website. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Nasis on November 02, 2006
    A very good story, I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 01, 2006
    Great story. I wasn't too surprised that Sakura didn't go through with "the deed" with Kiba, even though he seems like a nice guy. Since you mention Genma in this chapter, I'm wondering if you're going to have a certain ninja rescue her from Genma and his..."oral fixations". Although...Kakashi might have a few of his own! Can't wait for the next chapter. I don't know if you have an update e-mail going out to people, but I'd love to be informed when you update. Happy Late Halloween. Jen
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  • From ANON - mel on July 16, 2006
    I like the story. You've got a good start, so please update soon.

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  • From ANON - akasha on July 13, 2006
    aw, poor kiba... just left hanging like that. she could at least have given him a hand job or something... anyway, nice chapter. perhaps in the next installment she will figure out that kakashi is who she is really wanting! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - deandreahayes on July 03, 2006
    that was awesome.
    please update soon.
    keep up the good work.
    cant wait to see what happens next
    cant wait to read the next chapter.
    i really liked it.
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on July 03, 2006
    Oh, poor Kakashi...he won't know what hit him. Lol, I do love Sakura. She's one of my favorite characters and you've done her justice. My only complaint is that you should hurry up with the updates.
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  • From ANON - lilykt7 on July 03, 2006
    omg that scene with shikamaru was so funny. I would have loved to see his expression if Sakura had actually asked.
    PLEASE have sakura try and talk to other guys. Like Kiba and Neji. Even if we know she's gonna end up with Kakashi
    those scenes would probably be very amusing.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Lady on June 22, 2006
    5 months without an update.....

    People like you make me sad. You start off what seems to be a very promising fic, only to leave it dead in the water. =(
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  • From ANON - Naria on June 11, 2006
    UPDATE!! You are a wonderful author and I WANT to know what happens next!! Please?! I am reall curious!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - panda on June 01, 2006
    please update! i like where this is going...muahahahahah
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