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Reviews for Let Me Go

By : MLL
  • From Imagy on January 06, 2008
    nooooo!
    keep writting, babe
    your stories are so good!
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  • From LadySitea on September 08, 2007
    yea i want to know what the hell is going on oh and i really like the story please update
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  • From ANON - Meanderer on August 14, 2006
    Wow, please do continue this story. The premise is quite interesting, and I do so desperately want to know what happens to the boys! Your writing style brings the entire story to life.
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  • From ANON - hp on February 04, 2006
    dude... you so need to work on this... please?
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  • From Inuzuka on January 29, 2006
    I like the story...it's pretty OOC, and probably would work better as an original, but the premise of it is interesting, and the writing is well done.

    I'd like to see you continue it.
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  • From ANON - Sasuke_Lover1025 on January 21, 2006
    Me like a lot !!!!! lol... GO YOU !!!!!! I think you should keep it going... but you know it's up to you !!!!!! Just wanted to say i love it !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - mgp on January 19, 2006
    Oh, I never knew making Naru sad could feel so good. Fics always have Naruto's POV as the victim, but this is good. Yay, Sasuke grew a backbone!
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  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on January 19, 2006
    I really, really like the idea that you have here. This is a plot that I don't think I've ever seen before, and I like that for once Sasuke is the one being used, instead of the other way around. You do, however, have a few mistakes. The only really big one was a complete overuse of the term "blond". It's good to use it occasionally to break up the use of Naruto's name and common pronouns like "he", but you even used it more than once in the same sentence, and several times in the same paragraph, which is redundant and even worse than repeatedly using "he." You have a great start here, but your work would improve even more with a good beta. If you can't find one, e-mail me and I'll be happy to fill in until you can. Good work, and I'll look forward to an update!
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  • From ANON - KitsuneFun on January 19, 2006
    Wow.... let me say that again WOW!!! that was really good I like the attention you brought to the characters but, it seems like Sasuke is a little too passive is he going to go after Naruto and prove to him who he is? just curious since I like the SasuNaru pairing amongst others. This story definatley has me intreaged and I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the Great Work JaNe XD
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  • From ANON - Hezzer on January 19, 2006
    Whaaa! Don't get rid of this! It's amazing! Please, please don't drop it! I'm in love with it already! Update, please?!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on January 19, 2006
    Very intruiging and well written... please, do continue!
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on January 19, 2006
    Reakkym but really good! I love it and this is only the first chapter. I really want more please. So well written! I'll look forward. See ya!
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  • From ANON - RyuichiSakuma2 on January 19, 2006
    I really like how this is going. More more! ^_____^

    -Ryu
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  • From ANON - stranj100 on January 19, 2006
    Oh, I like it. A difffrent attitude for Sasuke. Most AU's have him using Naruto. Nice switch.
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  • From ANON - no name for now on January 19, 2006
    I think you should continue. But if you don't want to, the way the chapter ended brings a nice conclusion. Naruto could fight to have Sasuke back. It's seems like in most on the stories, Sasuke is the one trying to win Naruto's affection. This could be different. I like different. Either way it's your choice.
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