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By : Erisabesu
  • From littleolmee on October 19, 2007
    Oh I think I found something you added . . . this part about what is between Naruto and Shizune makes a little more sense now. So at some point things between them changed . . . will you at some point in this story add to that and explain what happened between them? When you posted the story last time you eluded to that she and even the other ninjas had issues as well, is this the case again? And will you add a part to explain what is going on with her to make her this way? Loved the interaction between Tsunade and Naruto, you present them so well. Question . . .since you have rewritten this story are you going to add elements for the newer manga episodes into it as well? I loved reading Iruka and Kakashi's argument. Not that it's ever fun to fight with someone you care about but those two have such powerful personalities that it's just great to see them interact and holding themselves back while still being themselves and pushing their points. Just the fact that after they made an agreement Kakashi left so the extent of his love for this man. I know you said that you changed somethings about the Uchiha massacre and such, I can't wait to see more on that. In the chapter it says that only Kakashi and Sasuke probably knew the real reason Itachi was out of the village . . .I hope to see more about that again. Loved Kakashi's reaction to Sasuke; so Itachi had been after Kakashi huh? More on that please! *begs nicely on knees* Lol, loved the sake in the tea cup. Be careful what you say Kakashi; the biggest surprise of the night, hee, hee. Lol, the part where Iruka was putting eyeliner on Naruto sounded like something that happens at my house every time my sister brings her daughter over for me to fix her hair for something! Lol, you know what they say beauty doesn't come cheap or painless! I was so rolling by the end of the chapter; poor Kakashi really got put over a barrel in this one. Hmm, payback for setting it all up? Guys going to be drunk by the time he finally gets towards the festival. That was one hell of a shock, I'm sure. Great chapter, loved it as always. Take care.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on October 16, 2007
    It's all set for the meeting huh? Kakashi is so sneaky. Especially loved the last part where Iruka thinks about a certain special Jounin that wasn't getting any that night, probably not anyway. Do you plan on presenting Shizune as disliking Naruto again? Can't wait for ch 6. Keep up the good work.
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  • From DuosAngel on October 15, 2007
    Sasuke and Naruto are so cute! And Kakashi is sooo evil. Oh well, he'll get what's coming to him. I so excited, we're getting to where you left off last time. I can't wait fro the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 14, 2007
    Aw. Cute scene. If Itachi didn't kill everyone in the clan, what is his story? Why does he and Sasuke have a tense relationship? What happened to the rest of the Clan? Where is Itachi now? I hope you clarify everything soon (perhaps in the next chapter, that would be nice). Cool Sharingan mind jutsu.
    update!
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  • From ANON - Vega on October 14, 2007
    I have been looking for a well paced, well written Naru/Sasu story and this one has fit the bill perfectly. And the Iru/Kaka thrown in is an added bonus. I like the length and the obvious thought you have put into your work and I am looking forward to the next update.
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  • From Telpei on October 12, 2007
    Aww, too cute!! :) I really have to agree with you, and wonder why everyone tries to see behind Kakashi's mask when they could be trying to get inside his pants instead ;) And he's so romantic!! *fangirl swoon* Iruka is one lucky guy.

    On the other hand, Sasuke and Naruto really need to talk to each other! I can't wait to see how they handle their little situation. I really like how you've written this story, with Naruto going to Iruka, Iruka (the loving, worried mother) talking to Kakashi, and Kakashi going to talk to Sasuke. :) This is very well written, and you've got me sitting on the edge of my seat to see what happens next! Please update soon!

    ps-the little scene with Konohamaru and Hanabi was sooo cute!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Rachelle Ryan on October 12, 2007
    Absolutely wonderful story. I think your characterization of everybody is dead on. I really love it. Its sexy and loving and angsty. Naruto getting a good punch in was sweet too.
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  • From cynaga on October 12, 2007
    I read this story way back when on FF.com (or net - whatever) and I am happy to see it being reworked here. I always saw it as more of a KakaIru story (a great one). Although at the end when you get into the hunt, for me that seemed like almost a seperate story. Anyway I am happy to be rereading it here - thanks! :D
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  • From leanne on October 12, 2007
    Kakashi and Iruka are incredibly sexy and fun to read in this story. Sasuke and Naruto are sweetly sexy and angsty, definitly a good to read. I hope you will update again soon.
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  • From jbjewel on October 12, 2007
    so glad to see you back. can't wait. I love this story and can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From MichiTheThird on October 11, 2007
    Go Naruto go Naruto go! The cosmos have answered my prayers!! An update!! Thank you so much!!!
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  • From leanne on October 10, 2007
    It is such a cool story I really love it and the way you are building the story is great and I love Iruka and Kakashi in this story they are hot together too. The orochimaru gap in the story, bypassing that whole experiance is interesting but totally allows for the setting of the story and the commencing of the romance, I love the fact you had Naruto punch Sasuke and run a way I think that is a totally naturall reaction from him, even if he really likes the person and was excited by him and what was being done. I think he would react the same way if he had found himself kissing or being kissed by Sakura only without the punching, he would have ran for the hills in confusion and excitement of finally attaining what he wanted. ( I just brought of Sakura only because she's a past crush and not that I'm a fan of Sakura/Naruto, because I'm not. It's just that in the original story he likes her so darned much, but I really think he'd outgrown that fatuation especially when he focusses on beating Sasuke and or bringing Sasuke back home from Orochimaru...) Uhh off topic there anyway, just love what you have written so far and hope to see more chapters soon.
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  • From ANON - Amber on October 09, 2007
    This...is too awesome for words. Now I see why there were so many reveiws, and for only three chapters! ^.~
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  • From MichiTheThird on October 09, 2007
    I missed reading this fic SO much. I didn't even realize I had already read it until I got to the part about Naruto's seal and then WONDERFUL memories came floating back. If you're updating it with new chapters, you will, undoubtedly, make my entire week! XD
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on October 09, 2007
    Hee, hee you got to love Kakashi and Iruka interactions. I really love how you present Kakashi in this story, you really caught his character and little quirks well. I especially like the addition of his thoughts while he is doing some of these things. Your imagination with another use for the Sharingan is wonderful. Kakashi and Sasuke exchanging experiences is one of my favorite parts of this chapter. I think my top fav for this chapter was Kakashi and his sleuthing while finding Sasuke and getting what was going on out of him. You just did such a wonderful job on that part. And of course your humor was very evident in the chapter as well which makes it all that much better. You reposting this story after tweaking it was a fantastic idea; this way you can reintroduce everyone to the story. Keep up the great work, and take care dear.

    littleolmee

    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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