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Reviews for Fish Food

By : ClosetSemeHinata
  • From LovePsycho on June 28, 2008
    Hmm...I'll stick around...cupcakes for you!
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  • From oohshiny on October 14, 2007
    WAGH NOW I NEED T KNOW TH END!!! could you email me when you update? ='( im at deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on February 02, 2006
    I like this fic...I really do.

    However...can you not make the fic shown as one HUGE paragraph!?

    This not only does this destorys the reader's eyes, it also gives a bad first impression about the story. And that's all it can take for a reader to ignore you right off the bat!!

    UPDATE SOON...WITH A NEW LINE FOR EVERY CHANGES BETWEEN SCENE AS WELL AS DIALOGUE!
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  • From ANON - kuro on February 02, 2006
    Not bad. I definately like the second chapter better than the first but I suppose there's less mean sex in there so that's probably why. Man, I hope Naruto gets saved soon; it's horrible to think his mind is completely gone... Well anyway, it's definately getting interesting so keep up the good work!
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  • From Inuzuka on February 02, 2006
    Erm. I think this should've stayed as a crack-fic one-shot...
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on January 18, 2006
    omg! that was hot! lol please update this, it has great potential for more chapters, you know...they bring him back to their hideout, more bondage, more torture, maybe a dungeon muahahaha sorry my evil fangirl self is showing :P yeah great story luvs it, please update please :D
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