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Reviews for Bathroom Break

By : LstDpNThght
  • From promise2003 on September 13, 2006
    more gaara and naruto please! I was so glad when I checked and saw that you had written a sequel. I loved this one too. I beg and implore you to write more if you find the time. :)
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  • From ANON - STARR* on January 19, 2006
    First off, great fanfic. I hope you make a sequel of this too. Second, in the Manga Akatsuki takes Shukaku (Gaara's demon) and Gaara ends up dead and then was brought back to life by what's-her-name. I was wondering if your story follows that plot or if it is slightly AU and Gaara still has his demon. Just courious is all.
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  • From ANON - ejqHorseLady on January 16, 2006
    Hey great sequel. I hope you make a sequel of this too, this is really good. I can just picture the end of the meeting and Gaara walking out to come face to face with a PO'ed Naruto, upside-down and hanging from the ceiling, of course, as Naruto tends to do. I really hope you do make a sequel and continue this, at least until Gaara goes back to Sand.

    I really like how you portray the characters, I can't really describe it but you have both Naruto and Gaara in character as how they would be after all that time. I'm not really sure if that makes sense, but as I said, I can't really describe it.

    Either way my final assessment of this story (and it's prequel) is very well rounded story with enough of a plot that further encourages readers to keep reading. Lemon was slightly above average for a PWP story, with a realistic feeling about it. Free of obscene dirty talk, (Face it who REALLY says "Fuck, yeah, harder baby" during sex?) and free of the words dick and ass hole (A real turn off when reading lemons and a sign of a slopy writer).

    I give this story a 9 out of 10 and highly recommend it in the PWP catagory.

    ejqHorseLady
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2006
    Soooooo good! Just brilliant, I love your writing style, it suits the storyline perfectly. Pleeeease write more, I crave NaruGaara!
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