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Reviews for The Sweetest Victory

By : mischiefmaker
  • From Sessygirl on April 13, 2008
    I was reading this fic on FF.net but to my knowledge you had never posted the recent chapter there... although by accident I came across you story one here and was happy to see a chapter I had not read.

    I was also sad to see that you haven't updated in a long while... I really hope that you will eventually update since this is an awesome fic...

    Please don't give it up.

    -Akiru-
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2007
    this is nice. you're very god at maintainig the flow of the story and i like where this is going. how the tensions and ideas mess up their heads and fuck with them... 'cause that's the most fun for us... ;)
    update soon, this is too good to be left hanging... !
    greez
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  • From Ishanatur on October 25, 2007
    please please please please please please please
    (im not sure i put enough pleases in there)
    I have to know how this ends up
    update soon and let me know when you do temitayo_g@hotmail.com
    thanxs >_
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  • From ANON - nikki on October 18, 2007
    I really wish you would update this. very cute story
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  • From ANON - ... :] on September 13, 2007
    I love you.

    That's it. I love you.

    This is seriously the best three-way Naruto fic I have ever read, and though it was a long wait for the sixth chapter, it was well worth it.


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  • From susanna on September 09, 2007
    This story is just so funny! :-) I laughed all the time. What I like particularly: That they act their age - sometimes they even behave as if they were a bit younger than they are. (At the moment I am a bit fed up with Sasunaru or Narusasu fanfics where they are both virgins and go in one night from admitting to themselves and to each other that they might be interested in more than a friendship to full-grown anal sex, which happens to be a perfect heavenly experience.)

    So I like the rather grotesque sexual jokes they play to each other - just the thing that boys and girls do when they have begun to be interested in each other, but still don't know how to express this interest. And your story is really funny and full of ideas! :-)

    Some minor quirks: Sasuke is a bit OoC. Well, of course, noone knows how he will be when he has finally defeated Itachi and returned to Konoha. Maybe he will be a bit more relaxed then than he is at the moment. But particularly in the first and second chapter I found some lines where I could not tell whether it was Sasuke or Naruto speaking.

    In later chapters it gets better.

    But the reason why I write: I hope that you are going to continue the story. :-)
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on September 08, 2007
    I think I dislike you. DX It hurts me inside that you left it there. Actually, I'm just impatient. But whatever. I hope for the next chapter soon, I want to see how they work it out!
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  • From ANON - Iroji on August 31, 2007
    Oh my God, I love this fic. Everything about it is absolutely fantastic: the dialogue, the prose, the plot... the not-quite-smut (you're such a tease!). I can't wait to read more! :::fans self::: This is flawless.
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  • From venia on August 28, 2007
    awww *____* why it took you so long to update? anyways, nice chapter,most of all you can't leave it there! I HAVE to know the sequel, the fic 's got really interesting now! things are finally clearing out -after all these jokes for the bet there's no coming back- and I wonder how sasuke will react and what exactly they are going to tell him...(i bet he'll sulk for a looong time unless they do smthin) and...Yay! a date! even if not in the best mood at first XD ...but i liked their dialogues and when Naruto got serious, telling her that he meant it when he said he wanted her. Uhm...Uhm...and when he thought about having two of his clones kicking his ass when he got home XDDD lol! poor him, trying to be logical for once!


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  • From roxnroll on August 23, 2007
    That was really good. I can't wait to read on.
    Rox
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  • From serenagold on August 21, 2007
    Oh my god... threesome next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! EEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This story is so fucking great! =^^= I can't wait. Update! Update! Update!
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  • From ANON - Kit-Kat on August 21, 2007
    Oh yay! You updated! I was sooooo happy when i saw this. I screamed my head off. I really can't wait for hte next chapter so you can't take to long in updating it!
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  • From ANON - milktea on August 21, 2007
    I cannot believe you updated this fic. I seriously don't know how to thank you enough *____* this is probably my favorite threesome fic of all time and here I thought there was no hope of ever getting past that nail-chew-to-the-root awkward moment. Very interesting how you handled Sasuke's response. It reminded me of the immature, angry, arrogant punk in K.M.'s canon. Also, I adore your Naruto's personality. You write him so hunk-o'-manly yet adhere to the general sweetness, obnoxiousness, and charm of his canon character. This is admirable considering so many fic writers--albeit talented--write him either as a girl with aberrant endowments or qualify his maniless as due to 'beast' inside, and so he often borders on boorishness. I find when reading sasunaru/narusasu fics that whenever a writer attempts to achieve what you've done, Naruto becomes an OC whose whisker marks and love for ramen are the only way of identifying him. So yeah... claps all over you.

    I love the sniffing the armpits bit--classic!

    Thank you for sharing this story, and very very thank you for updating it! Even if I can't read it for another forever and so, I'm squealing happy today. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ninjakitty on August 21, 2007
    OMG an update!!!

    i can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - mel on August 20, 2007
    Wow, I am really impressed with this story. You've done a really good job with the plot and the characters. I'd really like to "see" the scene with Sasuke in the genjutsu, that would be interesting.
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