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Reviews for SNAKES AND SAND

By : loveslave
  • From ANON - sneakyfox on May 13, 2015
    Older sister would be "onee-san," "onii-san" is for older brother. ;)
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  • From ANON - stagoya on August 22, 2006
    I loooove this! I really do hope you just keep it gaara/naru and don't add sasu/naru. There's enough of them already. -_- Not that I don't like it. XD Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chaptre. ^^
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  • From ANON - Tsukiyo on July 02, 2006
    It's pretty good so far; I'm interested in seeing just how things progress. I did notice two mistakes, though:
    1) It's Sunagakure, not Sunakagure.
    2) Gaara referred to his sister as 'Oni-chan', whereas he should have referred to her as 'Onee-chan'. Onii-chan is brother.
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on February 09, 2006
    I want an UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    good, but japanese typo; Gaara calls Temari oni-chan in your story- that means brother- one-chan would be sister or is he was being informal ane-chan
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