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Reviews for A Glitter Of Love

By : SoleyLost
  • From ANON - on January 12, 2006
    Woooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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  • From ANON - krickets on January 11, 2006
    its a nice story and a nice concept

    there are quite a few typos
    and also its a bit ooc
    Naruto drives himself to train
    he isnt the kind of guy who slacks off during training
    he challenges himself to work harder then everyone
    and often stays after every one else long into the night

    examples: Tree climbing
    he stayed the whole night even after sasuke left and wound up falling asleep in the forest

    rasengan
    he drove himself so hard the he wasnt even able to use his hands to hold chop sticks
    working for hours punching spirals into trees until he passed out

    i dont know it is just hard to read that part where you keep talking about him slacking off cause he dosnt
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  • From ANON - lo on January 11, 2006
    WHere is this going?? why does Naruto not want to train and get stronger?? Has he given up in your story?? It is still well written. I just want to know. Keep up the good work.
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  • From chinohana on January 11, 2006
    XD CX cool fic! update!!!
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on January 10, 2006
    Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know what's going on!!!!!!!!!!! So please update!!!!!!!!!!!

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - lo on January 10, 2006
    Interesting, I like how you began this story. It is preety well written. There are a few errors that look like they are just a result of fatigue, but over all this is good.
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