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By : KrickItat
  • From ANON - Chelsey on January 18, 2006
    I love this fic! I even avoided doing my english just to read this, be proud be very proud! I don't know why you don't like it it ROCKS MY FUCKING SOCKS OFF! I like the idea of Sakura as a dragon. It just works so well. As an artist myself I love the ideas of tattooes and all that they stand for. You CAN'T finish it yet! We still have to have the awesome sex (with more toys of course) and the reaction from everyone! I mean who gets a wicked tattoo and doesn't show it to at least one friend? So do please update! and do it soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
    ps- Somewhere in the snow too! Update please?
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on January 14, 2006
    yeah another chapter! thank you. still love it, it made me actually want to go out to get a tattoo for the sake of art,...but i'm a wimp and for the sake of my skin, and low tolerance of pain i'll not . but for actually making me want one i applaude you.
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  • From ANON - Aya on January 13, 2006
    Awesome chapter! I liked it, I'm sorry you did, but we love it ^___^ I love this idea of Sai and Sakura!
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  • From ANON - Valkyrie on January 13, 2006
    Don't end it yet! It's wonderful! And it moves! I love it. Please keep going!
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  • From ANON - Anya3 on January 13, 2006
    I loved this chapter :P I don't know how you couldn't. I had doubts about getting a tattoo and now I dont XD I love this story with a passion and im not sure why, maybe its the mix of the pain and the pleasure or the fact that its Sakura enjoying it. Keep up the great work and wonderful writing!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 13, 2006
    I really like what you did with that...it was pretty awesome. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Sukara on January 13, 2006
    Your story did something to me....when the second chapter came out, that night I dreamt I got a tattoo..it was on my shoulder, it was a sword that was red and black, than there was a snake that made a spiral up the sword, than there was wines along with it and throns....than I wetted my thumb and rubbed against the tattoo and it came off...so I was like..."Wtf?!" xDD.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 13, 2006
    Quality ficcage.Its great Sai gets this as a first fic or two.Actually two bullets is pretty intence,esp.for hours at full, ,they must have better batteries there however.I have five tats and three piercings( that are not ears). I am really pleased with yoour approach and the subject matter.
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  • From ANON - Lina567 on January 11, 2006
    OMG I love u! Sai x Sakura 4 ever! *gets killed*
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  • From ANON - Ile on January 11, 2006
    well i'm glad you kept going!! yay!! well.. now when's the nxt chapter comin out??!!
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  • From ANON - Me.. on January 11, 2006
    nice...

    sai/saku one is a rare pairing since he only appeared in the manga as of now.....

    oh well, as far as i've known, sai is an emotionless person with a fake smile.... doesn't really show/tell what he feels... poor him so I quite understand if he's a bit OOC since his characterization is not that shown in the manga --> he's still in the initial phase.

    but anyways, this is good.... aside from sai/saku I also want to see sasori/saku fics.... another rare one (too bad he died , sasori's kinda cute! ^_^)

    oh well... just update.... (hey, what did he paint to sakura's body? will it also come into life just like his other creations - or will sakura itself will be the "weapon of art"??? And, did the manga said if Sai's abilitites is a bloodline limit or what?? Huwah!!!! I forgot.... but I believed Kishimoto-sensei didn't specify. >_
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 11, 2006
    Hmm... just re-read the first chapter, and I realized that Sakura's bikini had boy-cut shorts: those aren't the same as the side-tie bottoms she had in chapter two. Boy-cut shorts are like the short spandex shorts she's wearing in the manga now: they're slipped on from the feet.
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 11, 2006
    Although I'm not a SaiSake supporter or tattoo lover, this is really interesting. But I don't understand why Sai had to put condoms on the vibrators. I guess it's my lack of knowledge on BDSM and masturbating, poor ol' me. ^^;
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  • From KrickItat on January 11, 2006
    hmmm well id just like to say that the (sp?) which i have also explained at the end of the piece
    was a reminder to MYSELF to check that spelling since my WordP didnt recorgnize it
    im just sorry i forgot to take it out

    ive never really had a problem with quick notes in the middle of a fic
    and i have read ALOT of fics

    but i'll put them at the end anyways


    im just glad you decided to give it a chance

    jennjenner: yeeeea but im bored and tired and i need to read the latest chapter of ultimate uke syndrome
    so im gunna skip more editing for the next couple days

    well i dont have a beta and well i have rarely needed one so far so this is how my editing process goes

    write the story
    do one edit
    post
    edit again

    a week later (maybe?) edit once more

    i find i edit much better when i can actually read how it is posted...dunno why
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  • From ANON - Iris on January 11, 2006
    Some criticism before praise: 1) Author's notes within the story are distracting. People don't want a running commentary of your thoughts while they're reading the story--keep them before and after your chapters. If you feel something needs to be justified, stick it in an author note after the chapter is finished. 2) If you don't think something is spelled right, use the spell checking tool in your word processing program--it's bad enough that you don't use a spellchecker or proofread, but then to draw even more attention to it by asking your readers whether it's spelled right is worse. At best, it's distracting, and at worst, it will turn people away from reading your story. These two things are huge turn-offs for people, and the only reason I continued to read your story was because it was an interesting concept.

    That being said, apart from some punctuation/capitalization issues, you have an interesting thing going on here, and your characterization of Sai is interesting as well.
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