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Reviews for Come Undone

By : naojun
  • From ANON - sharingun on January 27, 2006
    YEAHH!!! KAKASAKU ACTION! :3 You just made my day, I hope you'd continue.. pelase say you will!
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  • From Nushi on January 27, 2006
    I am stalking you all the over the fricken' place today. Sorry. I forgot to check AFF to see if you had commented on my review. ~stabs AFF~ I wish they had emailing type stuff to let me know when I have reviews and shit (that doesn't apply in this situation...but still). Not that ANYONE reviews ANYTHING on this site.

    But, I digress. So I also forgot to mention on FF that I really like the developing plot part of this story as well. Other than the whole Spying: “What kind of undies does Kakashi wear and does it affect his performance?" deal going on. That Lightning Country, always trying to pick a fight.

    I also hope you find a beta. If not I can pretend to be one and look over your chapters for you! ~wink~ But really, I would. But I should be a last resort probably. Since you've read some of my stuff I think you know what I'm talking about ~shudders~, and I'm glad you like it! YAY!
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  • From ANON - Luna on January 27, 2006
    Yay an update! Great build up going on. Love that first scene with the cards, I thought by the way you described it, it was a battle scene or something-- update soon!
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  • From LucKyo on January 11, 2006
    Hmm, very interesting. I've never read this pairing before and I'm curious how you'll handle it. Can't wait to read more chapters.
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  • From Nushi on January 08, 2006
    I'm giddy with excitement. I can't believe I've actually found another person who can write, WELL (I've only discovered about 5 so far). Wow, you cannot even imagine how eager I am for you to update.

    Sakura is well balanced and from what I've seen of the three boys they are also very much in character. Which really doesn't mean anything in fanfiction writing but it still makes me happy.

    The premise of your story interests me a lot since I almost wrote a "Kakashi's loosing his edge" type thing myself. Then I realized how much it sucked. I didn't really notice anything awkward (YAY) or any spelling mistakes. But I'm a horrible speller myself...

    Can't wait to see how things develop and I mean that.

    Your Nushi

    P.S. Come visit me sometime and drop me a line (because I want to stalk you now)! LJ nushi_akubi. AFF.net - Nushi. fanfiction.net - Nushi
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  • From ANON - wynter89 on January 06, 2006
    i like it. it isnt that often that i get to read Kakashi and Sakura to gether. i think there should be more if you ask me.
    please update soon. i hope to read more
    good luck
    may kami-sama be with you
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  • From ANON - Luna on January 05, 2006
    Kudos to you for writing a kak/sak fic! God, there just aren't enough. Anyway, I love how the story is set up. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - krickets on January 05, 2006
    ahhh very nice!
    i cant wait to see more from this story
    try not to take to long to update k'?
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  • From ANON - Leslie on January 05, 2006
    I like your plot for this story. Your characters are not to OC. Is Kakashi going to discover what Sakura is doing?
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