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Reviews for Come Undone

By : naojun
  • From DewiSri on May 24, 2009
    When are you updating again?
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  • From Breek on December 09, 2007
    this promises to be highly fascinating; will you be writing more to and updating soon?
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  • From pance on November 16, 2007
    i like the story so far. :)
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  • From ANON - Kiwichi on August 15, 2006
    ^^ Nice plot! I really like it, it's extremely hard to find Kaka/Saku fics these days...(nods) The characters are all in-character, so don't worry about it, I like your style of writing. So much better than mine. (goes off to sob in a dark corner)

    FF.net; Kiwichi
    LJ: Kiwichi722
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  • From ANON - Funkybilbo on July 25, 2006
    This is a really good start to a story, the characters are not OOC and it flows well so far, so you just have to email me when you update it, everytime.
    Laters
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  • From ANON - krickets on January 29, 2006
    another great chapter!
    you know you just have to take the time you need...the effort is
    usually worth the wait.

    i understand fully its usually a month between each one of my updates...
    not cool but there you go i wish i could motivate myself to do even
    bi-monthly but unfortunatly life gets in the way.

    kri-chan
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  • From ANON - Leslie on January 28, 2006
    Hey I understand about them being somewhat OCC but it really isn't to noticable at this point. Kakashi really hasn't had much to say, yet. Naruto is funny. Really want to read the next chapter. Sakura really doesn't seem to be to happy about her assignment.
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on January 28, 2006
    It is very interesting, please update soon!!!

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  • From ANON - tatami on January 27, 2006
    ahaha! i just added you to my fav!
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  • From ANON - baby_angel on January 27, 2006
    :) Yeah! good work! yea. yea yea yea yea! love love love! need more more more!
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  • From ANON - reader___132 on January 27, 2006
    i cant help wonderin what's going to happen next. me dont likes to wait in suspense (^_^) so i hope you wont leave me, us, like this.
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  • From ANON - N/A on January 27, 2006
    kakasaku?!!?!?!?!?!? yesssssssssssss lol yess!
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  • From ANON - kakashi on January 27, 2006
    YES ANOTHER PERSON WHO WRITES FANTASICALLY!!!! OH GOD, I FEEL SO HAPPPPPYYYYYYYIIIEEEEE!!!! AND TO TOP THAT ITS A KAKASHIXSAKURA TOO. YOURE THE BEST. I LOVE YOUR WROK. LOVE MAY NOT BE A GOOD WAY TO EXPRESS MY FEELIGNS FOR YOUR STORY BUT STILL, LOVE NONETHELESS. I CAN'T STOP SMILING! PLEASE DON'T BREAK THIS SMILE! XD
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  • From ANON - smiliey-face on January 27, 2006
    continuecontinuecontinuecontinue. Need i Say moRe?
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  • From ANON - Takue_onigiri on January 27, 2006
    love the plot. very nicely thought/planned out, also your characters were well written. not much occ i could find in them.

    now for kakashi and sakura. nothing to say other then have their releationship develop! ^^
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