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Reviews for Transformation

By : DarkSeductress
  • From SkippingAlice on February 22, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story, I hope your going to continue on with it. It really is a shame when authors abandon great stories; well, no matter what you do, this story remains as good as ever.
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  • From ANON - Chocolate Paperclips on January 25, 2006
    You're going to continue, right? I hardly ever see this pairing and I really love it! And I love the approach you've taken with it.
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  • From ANON - Mariam on January 23, 2006
    Whoa! I hope you continue this! Please! I'd really be interested in seeing more. I was totally impressed by this. I hope you pick this back up!
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  • From Frodo on January 10, 2006
    Hot damn, that was a really good read. You're an awesome writer. :]
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  • From ZiriOkamiotoko on January 10, 2006
    You're off to a great start, I'm looking forward to any updates. Good het is hard to find, and this is definitely a different pairing.
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  • From ANON - Archeeka on January 07, 2006
    Wow, I really like this. The structure and the approach is pretty intelligent, and you've got characterization and interests of the character down. I'm a hardcore Kankuro analyst/fan, and I think that you did a pretty sweet job of this. I especially love the part about hands, and how Kankuro faces harsh reality.

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  • From ANON - Archeeka on January 05, 2006
    ...Yeah, it's true. There really ARE no good het pairings for Kankuro. Kankuro either gets.... Shino, Gaara (if you're into sandcest), and Kiba, a specialty of mine.

    But you handled this well with observation and realism. Very frank, yet not overdone, acknowledgement and admiration of a person who's grown. I like. :D
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  • From ANON - Kirume on January 05, 2006
    Yay ! There are so few fics about Sakura not in love with Sasuke and annoying. I'm quite fond of her during the second part of the manga. My favorite female character after Temari :]. She was never quite that awful as people wrote her out to be, she just needed to grow up. Though she hasn't quite gotten over Sasuke has she ^^;;.

    Bah -__- I breathe Sasu/Naru, but I really dislike Sasuke during the second part. His drama is just boring.
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  • From Gigicerisier on January 05, 2006

    Hi, I have just read your fic and I really liked it. I haven't ever read only two Kankurou/Sakura fics which are yours and other in fanfiction. but I think you portrayed better than other fic..*wide grin*


    >Kankuro wondered as he watched her leave room: did Naruto know what he had in front of him? Would Uchiha Sasuke ever be able to appreciate what he carelessly left behind? Would the pounding in Kankuro's chest ever stop....

    I always wonder same things like he pondered..


    >Author's Note: This fic was written as an experiment. I never see any good heterosexual fics containing Kankuro and I wondered what female would the be the most logcial for my writing style and which female I could most see him involved with. So I picked Sakura, she saved his life in the second-part of the manga and you have to think her being there and the changes in her would be a shock to everyone around. So this isn't really a romantic fic per say, but more of a door-opener if I ever want to have a core for the pairing. I might write a companion or sequel (don't quote me on it).

    *nods* I agree that she is the most logical to be coupled up with Kankurou. (heh, heh then with Sasori... you see real Sasori/Sakura is my OTP now... Kankurou was pawned by Sasori then Sakura cured him... he heh, I feel like reading Sasori/Sakura/Kankurou fic now...)It is totally based on the comic. I like the way you wrote the story without any romance at all... It would be little bit awkward to just make them sudden lovers isn't it?

    Kudos to you, I am looking forward to reading your fic. (I am a total Sakuratard..) so, keep up writing!

    Gigi
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 04, 2006
    hey I think that this piece was very believable, I could see Kankuro thinking of Sakura as she healed him and vowed to help get his brother back with Naruto by her side as well, it was nice, if you make a sequel to it it would be very interesting to see where it would lead, very good read, ty, much huggles and smilles Mija...:-)
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