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Reviews for White Clouds

By : essenceofthedark
  • From ShikaNejiLover on October 30, 2008
    I think you did a great job on this lemon. It was very original, I always read lemons that say the same stuff over and over, but you used some original language and I really appreciate that in a fic. All in all I have to say an awesome read! 9 out of 10.
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  • From AliceInuzukaAburame on September 22, 2007
    wow.........i've actually never considered Neji/Shika before...i dont know why.........that was about maybe the hottest thing i've ever read and the end was sweet ^__^
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  • From Gwyllion on March 05, 2007
    WHAT AN ABSOLUTELY LOVELY AND SMUTTY FIC YOU WROTE HERE!! I enjoyed it immensely, though am a bit sad to see it end. T__T I would love to see more development in this relationship with Neji and Shikamaru. There's hardly any good fics with them out there. Hope to see more of your stuff! Wonderful job and thank you so much for sharing this with us. :D
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 13, 2006
    Yay! I've been wondering what would happen if we got those two together! *MWEOR!*...Very yummy! I thought it was really great!...The lemon was fabulous and I liked the beginning monologue in which he gets caught...though I felt you overused the 'genius' characteristic and had some problems on the grammar, thankfully, it didn't take away from your cute ficlet! Good job and hopefully you crank out more NejiShika fics! The world could definitely use more of them! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Hestia on August 25, 2006
    I like Shikamaru's laziness and the connection between clouds and Neji's eyes. I like Shika a the bottom here. I'd like more . . .
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  • From ANON - banshee_tao on August 10, 2006
    best lemon I've ever read...And NejiShika is my favourite pairing, so you rock!>o
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  • From ANON - secret on July 30, 2006
    the pairing is really nice. but i don't like the fact shikamaru's the uke. nevertheless, your writing-style is great.
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  • From ANON - shawna on January 10, 2006
    I LOVE THAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! neji and shikamaru are sooo sexy thank you :):):):):):):):):):):):):)
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  • From ANON - teddybomber on January 04, 2006
    WOW!! I LOVE this story. you even gave me butterflies! It's very well written. I wish people could use more of this pairing. Shikamaru and Neji all the way! Please keep writing diffrent stories here on aff you are very talented. You really get me into the story and make me feel like I'm there. YAY for a lot of descriptions!! hope to read a new story from you soon!!! *~tb
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  • From ANON - lo on January 04, 2006
    Some grammatical errors with present and past tenses and with plurals. Keep working and you can become a good writer.
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  • From ANON - SparrowHawk on January 04, 2006
    Awesome fanfiction, man. Absolutely loved it. ^_^
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