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By : godofcontradiction
  • From ANON - ErsajChronicles on January 21, 2006
    tee hee another great chapter. Gaara and Sasuke fighting for Naruto. sigh if only Naruto knew, he'd run for the hills XD. neji's sorta like the peacemaker :D i like that. poor Kiba.....hopefully he'll be ok XD
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  • From ANON - digi-girl on January 21, 2006
    whee, rivalry. what fun. I can so see Garaa and Sasuke sparoticly breaking out into mini battles for Naruto's affection. Like who can get the highest grade, who can do better at a sport, little things like that. hehe, and then Neji would totaly be on the sidelines trying to sneek attention from him. Ah, rivalry, such fun. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Kativachan on January 21, 2006
    Gaara is so possesive! That's so cute!
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  • From ANON - Courtney on January 21, 2006
    This was an awsome chapter ^^ I can't wait until you update!!
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on January 21, 2006
    Of course I do agree. Would Naruto be the hero of the story if he was weak? He's not. And he shows his emotions.
    I have to tell you, I didn't really like this chapter. Not that it was bad, but it's already a little unnerving when Sasuke and Neji have a glaring contest, so when it's the three os them it's somewhat too much. Naruto is not a lotery prize.
    In fact the whole Sasuke, Neji and Gaara running after Naruto and glaring at each other is a bit old. But I think I already told you that.
    There's a fanfic on ff.net that's called "the new guy". It's a good fanfic, well written with long chapters, but during all the 20 (or something like that) first chapters it's all like that. So, even if I keep reading it, I think it's what made me bored with this kind of plot.
    I'll keep reading yours even if you continue like this, but, well, please, don't do it all the time.
    But, what's good is that there is a real difference between his relationship with them. He's friend with Neji from the beginning, Gaara knows his secret and he hates Sasuke, hahaha!
    I'm still crossing my fingers that Neji and Gaara will fell in love with each other. Something like:

    Sasue/Gaara/Neji: Dobe/Naruto! I promise it won't hurt (too much)
    Naruto: Kyaaa! You are all lousy jerks! Untie me!
    Gaara: I'm his keeper, so back off!
    Neji: Maybe, but he likes me more. He was friend with me from the first day we met!
    Gaara: He tld me his secret! And he cried on me
    Neji: Yes, but...What do you think you're doing, Uchiha?
    Sasuke:* froze with his hand in Naruto's pants*.....
    Gaara: Don't touch him! He's mine!
    Neji: No mine!
    Sasuke: Why's that *smirk, cross arms*
    Gaara: We already told it!
    Neji: Yeah, so what's YOUR reason?
    Sasuke: Well, I'm hot, handsome, athletic, smart-
    Gaara/Neji: We are too!
    Gaara: Yes! Look at Neji! He has beautiful long hairs, incredibles white eyes, a nice body, he's the SC class president, he's nice-
    Neji: Gaara has awsome red hairs, incredible green eyes, a hot body, respected (feared) by everyone-
    Gaara/Neji: *stop to look at each other*.....
    Sasuke: *Lift an eyebrow and smirk*
    Gaara/Neji: *making out*
    Sasuke: Right...So, Naru-chan, where were we?

    What? You don't like this plan? Ow, it's too bad! *grin*.
    Hum, I'd like to see Naruto blushs from an embarassing situation in the next chapter, you think you could do that?
    Well, keep the good work! Sakura bashing *lift SasuSaku haters banner*! And good luck! Oh, and you should read the fics of this author, you might like them!
    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - idiot_lord on January 21, 2006
    WHOO! LOOK AT THAT! only his few first weeks in school and already boys are fighting over him. That's so CUTE! And look, Little Gaara is growing up to become like a (somewhat) lady's man for Naruto. heh. Sasuke is getting more fiesty and Neiji is finally into the battle. YAY! Oh, this is just so exciting, I think i'll die from excitment before the next chapter!! (beep...beep.....beep....beeeeep~dies) no! can't die! must live and read! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER! ARG! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on January 21, 2006
    Good chapter wonder what going to happen next :D
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  • From ANON - Kenz on January 21, 2006
    This one was funny ^-^
    *fake british accent*
    "your both stark raving mad!"
    *giggles madly*
    sorry it was funny ^-^;;;
    Please continue ^-^
    and please dont abandoned this fic I tihnk its good ^-^
    And hey if you ever get stumped you can always ask me for ideas ^-^V/
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  • From ANON - yan-yan again on January 21, 2006
    one author here would tell us to leave our e-mail address, so she could send us a note and the linke when the update is up and she/he would always remind us to tell her/him if we do not want to be included in the alert in the future... hmm something like that... you can ask the other readers 1st of vourse, maybe its jut me who wants an alert... heheh ^___^
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  • From ANON - Vox on January 21, 2006
    And the mature and wise Neji comes to the rescue ^^
    Hehe. It's always fun to watch Gaara ans Sasuke fight like gradeschool kids. More soon please. Flowers and cookies to you.
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  • From ANON - yan-yan on January 21, 2006
    LONGER! LONGER! good GOD! I really do love your story! the first story in months to get my attention again and keep it, I wonder why i didn't read this before or never noticed it!. you've been giving gaara, sasuke and neji a very equal standing w/c i find rarely in other love web stories.. in them there's always an inclination... keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Star on January 21, 2006
    I love this story so far. Chapter 9 had me going awwww for both naruto and gaara. It's like I could feel their pain too. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kaecy on January 21, 2006
    I so love your story! I do hope you update so0n! :) hugs and kisses!ciao
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  • From ANON - Looli on January 20, 2006
    hony where have you been I miss you????:(
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  • From ANON - LadyApollonia on January 20, 2006
    SQUEE!! I got so lost in that last chapter! It was so poetic at the end! Love!!!!!!!!! It was so beautiful! I personally think that Neiji should save Naruto & RUIN the Harunos! Mwahahahaha!!! ahem. Sorry. But that's still what I think. Yay for Gaara! *pets the little Gaara on her phone* I love him. ^_^ Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter! And I'm sorry that I don't have any constructive criticism. I got so caught up in how you described things, any mistake you may have made (if you made any at all) didn't show up on my radar.
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