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By : godofcontradiction
  • From ANON - Lola on June 04, 2006
    Zomfg! Your story makes me so pleased!! It is so hard to find anything these days that is not poorly written or the same overused excuse for a plot. You manage to break out of the mold. AUs that are poorly thought out tend to be fairly to completely insipid... but I am a huge fan of well crafted, well written AUs, such as this...and there are so few of them! The only mild thing I have in the way of critique would be the fact that you stayed with the 'canon' pairing... but that is mostly just personal taste I suppose. Since it is an AU you have so much potential to get creative with character relationships, staying with the established pairs seems a bit shallow. I suppose we can thank your readers for that, certainly there are lots of SasuNaru fans out there, and it certainly isn't enough to stop me from reading a well written and entertaining fic. T hanks so much for sharing your writing with the good-fic starved children of the world! And can I just say... This fic delivers!
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  • From ANON - Draco on March 14, 2006
    DUDE! it just accured to me! you made gaara the local highschool PUNK!EMO kid! SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!HAHAAAHA! oh god! just watch as he trys to pick naruto up on his bike and gets turned down because he walks to and from skool with neji everyday now. and of course sasuke would just have to happen to be there and overhear.
    RELEASE THE GREEN DEMON!!

    (is released)
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  • From ANON - righthand on March 14, 2006
    id like to see you explore this whole thing with narutos ignorence to city life and certian foods a bit.
    for instance
    neji offers to take naruto somewhere for lunch after (maybe after naruto thanx him 4 his first soda EVER!) and who should they meet there but susuke and his older brother itachi, who naruto starts crushing on almost right away.
    and there you go, gaara, neji and sasuke all chasing naruto who has his first gay crush on itachi. FUN ALL AROUND!

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  • From ANON - ... on March 14, 2006
    So... NaruSasu, huh? Alright, it's your story, but it does seem like a waste of a story with the lines:
    'Naruto was pleased. Neji's face broke from his usual calm mask, his eyes crinkling faintly in mirth as his slow, hesitant smile took over to transform the beautiful porcelain face to life. He was beautiful. Naruto told him so.

    "Am I?" Neji lightly wondered.

    "Yeah, you're even prettier than the girls!" Naruto grinned. "Aww, is Neji blushing?!"'
    in it. Anyways... Good work!
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  • From ANON - gonrie on March 11, 2006
    YYYYYYYYYYEAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! This story is ssssssssooooooooo hot!! I love love love it! Please make more friendship shika-kiba-naru and more SASU/Naru 'cause anyway it's the final pairing. MOre frienship neji and gaara. You could put them together....that would solve the problem...:P

    Anyway...could you e-mail me when you update please? I love this story too much!
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  • From ANON - baddaytoday on March 10, 2006
    I think you're making an awesome story!! I'm just love it!! Btw, does Naruto's going to be in the soccer team?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2006
    oops. 5 i mean, lol.
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  • From ANON - A.H. on February 13, 2006
    i hope u do a love triangle tho. >:3

    I would type more, but im lazy. D: This is so far good tho. Going to ch. 4 now. Ja.
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  • From ANON - Tenshi on February 13, 2006
    WHAT HAPPENED? WHAT HAPPENED? C'mon, please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meow on February 12, 2006
    Dude! This is so good! The part where Naruto was crying at the park almost had me in tears! Meep! Its so good! Don't u dare stop or I'll be forced to attack u!
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  • From ANON - Meow on February 12, 2006
    Dude! This is so good! The part where Naruto was crying at the park almost had me in tears! Meep! Its so good! Don't u dare stop or I'll be forced to attack u!
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  • From ANON - Shishiya on February 09, 2006
    Ow!!!!!!!!! It's great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please updat son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - LuvURSkin on February 09, 2006
    omg, you have to marry me.

    ps

    PLEASE UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - pumking on February 09, 2006
    OMG! this is the BEST naruto-in-modern-school IN ALL THE LAND! EVER!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2006
    This is going a lot better than i thought it would. nice going. I was hoping that Naruto would end up with Neji but... oh well, SasuNaru is good too. So let's see what else happens ne?
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