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By : godofcontradiction
  • From ANON - himeyume on January 14, 2006
    i gave u a review and this is how u repay me with a cliffhanger U Suck! ....................... no u don't man that was mean u left it like that..... grrrr I hope u update soon I want to know more about them soon pls update k bai bai
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  • From ANON - RieKa on January 14, 2006
    i lurve this story sooo much!! xD i lurve SASUKE and NARUTO.. they're sooo cute together.. ahihi.. ^^ good job.. and.. well.. keep up the good work.. ^^

    xD
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  • From ANON - Iishtafreakyo on January 14, 2006
    I noticed your story, "This Way To The Stars" and thought that since I was bored, I would go ahead and read it. As I read through it I realized that your story is very well thought out. I enjoyed what you have written and I would like to point out something. ^^

    Your story needs a beta. I'm sorry if this sounds... Rude... But there are glaring spelling mistakes and other things that would make your story that much better. I'm not trying to be cruel to you by telling you that you need a second source to check your chapters before posting them...

    I'm just offering you a beta. Personally I would LOVE to beta your story, fix your chapters and help you with upcoming ones. ^_~

    Please reply as quickly as possible.


    ~Freak
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  • From ANON - clowangel on January 14, 2006
    *sigh* I knew it.. :( oh well.. I'll read on as long as there are at least SOME NejiNaru parts..
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  • From ANON - sansty on January 14, 2006
    OMG OMG OMG!! LOVED THAT!! I LOVE WHERE YOU ARE GOING WITH THIS AND IC AN'T WAIT FOR MORE! *waits patiently on seat*
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  • From ANON - Saki on January 14, 2006
    *giggles* un ^^;. Omg...I love that poem that Sasuke read including the one where it's actually dedicated to him! I hope the girls will shut up and think for a second who he dedicated to..^^;; Sorry, I'm just amazed how the girls doesn't even think except for being nuts over Sasuke... As for Naruto kun, I hope he just knows that Sasuke's really, really giving him hints to him knowing that Sasuke likes him.^^ ne, I can't wait for the next chapter!! *blushes*
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  • From ANON - BlacKat on January 14, 2006
    0.0; hey sorry I didn't review for the last chappie ^^; just a bit too busy in the last week and so XD yea' Well YAY for chapter 8!!! XD I laughed out loud when Naruto had to read a poem lol my sister thought it was wierd that I was laughing and it was creeping me out 0.0 and then I was smiling the whole time when Sasuke had to do his XD and in the end I was like lol Naruto you have an admirer!!! XD atleast his the only blonde in the class 0.0 what if Ino was there!?!?! >.> that would be oober scary XD atleast Sakura wasn't there or she might figure it out and get Naruto 0.0...XD FAN GIRLS MAKE THE WORLD GO ROUND~... -.- partly I think...
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  • From ANON - mieran on January 14, 2006
    That was awesome,
    to sweet, i enjoyed it, but one question?? Are you
    gonna make Neji and gaara like naruto too??
    If you hadnt decided then can you not make them all love
    NAruto cuz they always get hurt,
    but anyways I lvoe this chappy
    cuz i adore poetry
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  • From ANON - yukiko on January 14, 2006
    wow, this is quite good. I'll stay for more ^^
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  • From ANON - moi on January 14, 2006
    *gasp* you. used. my. all-time. favorite. poem. i love you! okay... so maybe it's my second all time favorite poem (shakespeare's sonnet 105 is wicked awesome...) but sonnet 18 was perfect for this story. that scene was so cute! in a.. sasuke-ish kinda way.. O_o...
    anyway great chapter cant wait for more!
    ~moi
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  • From Kativachan on January 14, 2006
    Oh, you know what I forgot to say? That chapter reminded me a tiny bit of the movie 'Dead Poets Society' I love that movie so so much!
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  • From ANON - Vox on January 14, 2006
    And by the way, it would be reeaally nice to see a Lee/Gaara pairing. Please, at least consider it? please?
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  • From Kativachan on January 14, 2006
    Yay! I love SasuNaru ^.^ Man, you have a nice taste in poetry...and music! I love System of A down! Great chapter. I love the fact that you update often.
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  • From ANON - Vox on January 14, 2006
    =^^=
    So pretty, with the poetry... Poor, poor Naru-chan so confused. Nice chapter, if a bit short.
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on January 14, 2006
    I'm happy my reviews give you ideas, it's good to know that your reviews are useful. Well, good chapter again. Haha, Sasuke sure love to embarass Naruto! Saying a poem like this in front of the all class and making it clear it's for him! I think Iruka should make them work together on it, you know, "Naruto, to improve your reading skills in the poetry domain, you are going to work on it with Sasuke who gave us a beautiful reading last time, and you're gonna make it in front of the class", but maybe this kind of thing is a little overused. You know what could be cool? Using some things that happen in the manga, like some fight (without necessary making them being fight, but an other way to compet) or relationship between some characters (I want to see Sai! That is, if you've read the scan of the manga, if not, you can always go to this adress to have them in ddl, there's an english version (I'm french, and that's a french site) :http://naruto.japflap.com/index.php?page=media,dl,manga.) Is Itachi going to play a part. I'd love to see him give a big wind to Sakura. And, oh yeah! Forgot, Yaoooh! SasuNaru won! There is less and less SasuNaru fics these times, so that's really good! Hope you'll make it long! A nice long story with a lot of Sakura bashing and Naruto blushing and Sasuke smirking and well, you got the point. And please, not too much on the romantic side to Sasuke, more on the perv' one, he's not a serial lover, more a pervert bastard. Anyway, good luck! Ja ne! ps: I still vote NejiGaara if you're up for it too.
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