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By : godofcontradiction
  • From ANON - Trekiael on January 16, 2006
    Angsty chapter. That was to be expected, after all, we already know that Naruto's life is not easy and it give a reason to be closer to Gaara, they are the same. I think it's great you didn't make him pass out, it's too easy. Anyway, that was very good. You know, another author told me I was psychik (maybe you know her stories, she write under the penname Dead on Arrival in ff.net and Ded in aff) and I told her that no, I don't think I am, it's just that gret spirit meat, don't you think so? Well, that's good to know we agree on some points. Oh, and I definitely don't think that you make Naruto a weak uke. Being cute and sensitive doesn't mean weak. Just that sometimes you crack down crying, and when your life is a fucking hell and you're tired because of so much beating, so, yes, it's normal. Naruto is a uke notheless! I think for now he doesn't really understand what's happening and how to stand or react. But for me, I think he has great potential to become a very seductive one, one with the capacity of making Sasuke's hormones go wild, well, don't know if you'll use it, but I think so. You can make him blushing (he's cute when he does) resisting, being scandalize, shocked, or seductive, I love all of that, but please, don't make him be the seme, never. Nice thing this chapter was longer, ling chapters are yummy! Anyway, good luck! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Briryan on January 16, 2006
    Great chapter!) Sad, but well written. What a little witch that Sakura is. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - neko_O on January 16, 2006
    i was a little bit disappointed when it turned out to be gaara instead of sasuke. its like you WANT us to change our minds and choose a gaa/naru instead of naru/sasu.. but i suppose this is your way of making it up for the fans who voted for gaa/naru and didnt get the pairing they wanted.

    just tell me this is a definite sasu/naru and i will have peace of mind. :D love story so far. update!
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  • From ANON - rachi on January 16, 2006
    Oh... oh.... *teary eyes* Naruto... No.... *sniff* I feel so.. sad! And Gaara as well... Although Naruto made a good decision about not wearing the eyeliner. Looking like a raccoon wouldn't really help his situation, would it? *cries* I'm so sad for them!

    But you did a great job writing the chapter! I couldn't take my eyes from the screen, and I had to get a kleenex. ;.;

    But I still loved it! Good job, please update soon! *huggles*

    rachi
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  • From ANON - lo on January 16, 2006
    This is getting really good. Very impressive. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Sasu on January 16, 2006
    " I feel pwetty, oh so pwettyy.....( pretty) I feel charming, oh so charming, it's alarming how charming I feel!" I have to share my nice singing voice with you! I only hope I could perform it to you :D And thanks for the cookie. It was tasty ;) as your story. Sakura's fater is so cruel! OMG! You should stop that! *sobsob* Oh, and I can see headlines " New best friends: Gaara and Naruto." It was nice that you made them undertand each other's. Cool! And make Neji and Naruto to go to shopping! Then Sasuke would make something stupid :D:D Lol
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  • From ANON - DragonDame57 on January 16, 2006
    oomgsh.. how cute.. TT.TT i love the gaa/naru pairing.. let's keep it that way .. ^^ i onno.. i like sasu/naru and neji/naru too.. i'm confused now. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2006
    YES!!! *super-glomps* Not a NaruSasu moment! (Yes, yes, I _know_ that this is a NS fic, but...)
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  • From ANON - Vox on January 16, 2006
    Hi. Um. You're awesome, you know. I'm really moved by this chapter. I love how you made a parallell for Naruto and Gaara, you know, the demon versus the beating. A lot of authors of AU stories doesn't think about that, and it kind of takes away an important part of Narutos and Gaaras friendship/love. I hope that makes some sense to you. Damn that Sakura bitch, btw.So,um, keep it up. I'm in a very wmushy state right now, so I'm gonna curl up in my couch and cry for poor little naruto for awhile. Yeah. So, please update soon, your story kicks ass. Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Kenz on January 16, 2006
    KAWAII in a sadistic kinda way.........
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  • From ANON - buto_ng_pakwan on January 16, 2006
    this fic is really good! you caught my interest even though i don't watch naruto..... though, i have to admit that i had a hard time understanding it because you're too deep and i can't keep up with you! anway, i think you know who i am... di ba obvious?
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  • From ANON - blood water on January 16, 2006
    WAAAIIII! SUPER KAWAIII CHAPPIE!!
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    bwahaahahaha! oOo by the way.. Is Naruto going to end up being s defenceless UKE?!
    I BEG you! please..pleeeaaase don't make Naruto an incapable dansel in distress!!

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    I have another suggestion for a pairing! How about NejiGaara?! *sigh I don't see enough of those around..
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    Anyways PERFECT chapter and keep updating! ^^

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    *holds giant poster with the words "UPDATE SOON!!" on it*
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    Ja ne!
    -bloodwater-
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  • From ANON - ErsajChronicles on January 16, 2006
    ooooo. I just found this story today and I like it! I find it cute, and Sakura annoying XD. I like how Neji and Sasuke are fighting over Naruto's affection. I can't believe Sasuke sucked on Naruto's finger and read a poem to him out loud in class. He must really want his blonde dobe! sigh...cliffhangers, gotta love them. can't wait until you put out the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - diamond_princess2006 on January 16, 2006
    heeee sasuke's sexy without even trying ! well what's naruto going to do about this... hope to see an update soon
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  • From ANON - Sora Jr on January 16, 2006
    I am glad you liked the poem. I am just happy I could make you happy!! I am just glad to review for such a wonderful story with a great auther.
    I can't wait untill the next chapter just so I can review again. Your the greatest!!!!
    -see ya
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