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By : godofcontradiction

From ANON - tedz on January 16, 2006
omg!! XD fell in love with your story, lol i'm serious ..updates more! very hard to vote thoug...luv all the pairs X3..sas/naru..? (but neji/naru=cute couple ^-^..and well gara/naru is like sweet course, but oh well *votes for sas/naru*
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From ANON - powder07blossom on January 16, 2006
So sad... *sniffs* You're so awful... :( Joke!!! I LOVE IT!!! A little pain in the major characters is inevitable... It helps build character...

Can you make it so that Gaara beats Sakura? :P Not that guys are supposed to beat up girls... It's just that Sakura deserves it, that bitch!

WAAHH!!! I love this fic!!! DO NOT, and i mean, DO NOT ABANDON THIS FIC! Please... Coz a lot of authors have killed theirs, seems like the thing nowadays, and I hate that... Grr...

If you leave this fic, I'm gonna run after you wielding a katana ^_^
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From ANON - Akina on January 16, 2006
Your so retarded it's funny. Anyways I loved this chapter I thought it was sweet that you let Gaara and Naruto Have a moment together. *dabs eyes with really wet hanky* It was just so damn sweet.
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From yks on January 16, 2006
You know I love your work and I really look forward to your updates. And I respect that this is your fic and I am not going to criticize your creative process but can you PLEASE make sakura and her family pay for what they did to Naruto! Its one of those things that I cant stand, abusers should be punished! You maybe heading to where I think you are (please?) - Iruka finds out about Naruto and fosters him (I personally like the relationship between the two). So yea, its just a request from a fan of your fanfic.
And this is just something I noticed from your last chapter, if tons of ppl havent already mentioned or something you already have brewing on the back of your head, that Ino is also blond...since most of the class didnt notice Sasuke's gender "confession," I think that can play into Ino and Sakura's rivalry.
Thanks again for updating so soon and Yay! finals are over!
yks
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From ANON - Mochi~ on January 16, 2006
Those Haruno bastard! I'm going to kick their arses to Mars! Hurting my poor Naruto baby.. *cries and pets my blondie*

Wow, that was a really sad chapter. Angst is just so.. *hearts, even though it's so sad* I loved that Gaara-Naruto understanding part. Overall a great chapter, darl'. You're so the best.

Say, little girl.. you like cookies, neh? *wiggles eyebrows* I have lots and lots of cookies over there in my trunk. Would you like some? Lots of cookies! And maybe in exhange.. you could give me the whole idea for this plot.. maybe? *Bambi eyes* Come on, I cant wait! Waaaaahh..

*throws cookies*
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From ANON - blueinferno on January 16, 2006
you know what? I really like this story...and i don't like Sasuke/Naruto's...but i really like this!! I don't even know what to say, i'm totally enraptured with the story!

please update soon! *sniffles* =3

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From ANON - Lulu on January 16, 2006
Poor naruto-kun....lucky for him thet he gets the good locking guy in the end...^o^
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From ANON - Tamara on January 16, 2006
I read the chapter anyways even though i said my goodbyes...i feel like a puppy going back to it's owner that mistreat it, and didn't give it want it wanted *humph* -turns head to side-

this was a good chapter and well written too...
i don't really know what to say, everything about it was great Gaara and Naruto having the same problem, Neji and Naruto instant friends...and he made Neji smile >_
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From ANON - Firestarburst on January 16, 2006
Aww cute sappy moment between Naruto and Gaara. Looks like they'll have each other to lean on. It's good to have someone in your life that you can relate too though this common ground is a sad one. Wonderful chapter.
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From ANON - Bakura on January 16, 2006
Wow, that was fast.
I really LOVED those two chapters, the poetic one was cute with a strong ending, and the other was just strong.
Naruto-Gaara friendship is so cute ^________^~!

Sakura must DIE . :X

keep updating, you make me happy ^^
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From ANON - losthimagain on January 16, 2006
Hi and Sasuke is kind of a mystery..........I really can't tell to much about him........he actually seems kind of annoying right now ^^ Thank you for the Gaara Naruto moment and I hope they become the best of friends *wink wink* XP Please update soons ^^!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
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From ANON - Kiba kun (too lazy to log in) on January 16, 2006
Gaara to the rescue! *waves* I can't wait until the next chapter! But this chapter was so sad and cute... Gaara has a soft spot! =]
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From ANON - Iron Dragon Maiden on January 16, 2006
Son of a mother fucking bitch! What the fuck is his problem beating up a minor for a lying whore! Slutura is such a coward, runs to big-ass daddy with lies when she doesn't like something. Well you know what whore? You're just lucky Naruto didn't call the cops and press charges for child abuse. Which reminds me, why doesn't he? Or maybe he is ashamed of it and is scared of what could happen to him afterwards? But then again, I can't stand it that those bastards can get away with it. So snce Naruto and Gaara are more or less on the same boat maybe you can make Kiba find out and then tell the authorities like any good friend would (not to mention get a damned good lawyer to take money from the HOrunos, preferably make them bankrupt, and have Slutura placed in an orfanage because her parents are a VERY bad example and not fit to havethe title at all). Sorry, as you noticed whenever something bad happens to one of my favorite characters I tend to think of all the possibilities to 'avenge' them. Must be a side effect of being an ex-kid of the class that was always picked on. Although I did get rich last year by doing the idiots homework for 5$ per exercice plus interest if they don't pay right away, so it's all good. As you can see I'm very twisted and vindictive so you don't have to take my suggestions if it goes against your plot. Although it would make me very happy. Besides, considering what a spoiled brat Slutura (that is what I will refer to her from now on, in fact I am ashamed of sharing the same gender as that bitch) is I'd say that she is kind of girl that could commit paricide just because thing don't go her way. In fact, something similar to that happened. A girl wanted to meet her boyfriend but her mother wouldn't let her so the girl, who very spoiled, killed her mother. I can see this happening with the bitch only with a couple of diffferences: Slutura is obsessed with (the poor soul) Sasuke, she asks (more like demands) her parents to make him her fiance (NOW the poor guy has got the best reason in the world to commit suicide), Sasuke (is he an orphan? I don't think you mentioned it) rejects her because she is just another stupid fangirl or his parents don't (want to torture their son) find the HOrunos to be rich enough or something (the point is that the offer is REJECTED, haha), the parents come back and tell Slutura the knews. She loses it and accuses her parents of lying and as selfish bastards (for once she will be telling the truth) that want to keep her from her 'prince charming' and just kills them. Naruto freaks out (who wouldn't) and calls the police. Hopefully when she goes into jail she will get raped while we're there (it does happen at prison, the only hay that you can get accomodations is if you're loaded). I never really liked her for many reasons: ONE she treats Naruto like shit and doesn't respect him for no real, ralid reason; TWO she says that she 'loves' Sasuke but she just has the mother of all infatuations and because of this, can't think on her own; and THREE what the hell was her problem giving up her best friend fora crush that isn't valid, at least Ino was willing to keep her friendship with her despite the fact that they both liked the same guy, not to mention the fact that if it weren't for Ino, Slutura would have been picked on by everyone her entire life.
So this is my little rant/analysis (if you culd call it that). Great story you kept the characters in character and they're very well writen. I hope that you update soon, 'cause this story ROCKS!
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From ANON - MeeraMeeraluv on January 16, 2006
:o Poor Naruto.. Are you going to kill Sakura's parents? Please? Can you? Maybe her too? :D
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From ANON - yan-yan on January 16, 2006
what a great way to start my lazy life of boredom! Naruto totally rocks! especially with our little sasu-shan! oohhhh please update soon! I love it and Im dreading to hear it end *the chapter, i mean...* you should start an update alert! tell us when you're planning one ok? ^__^
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