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Reviews for Nothing but a Piano Lesson

By : Devilishangelxxx
  • From ANON - Teri on January 18, 2006
    OMFG Ashley.......thats all I can say is OMFG.......that was beyond gross, but I gotta admit it was HOT HOT HOT!!!!! LOL. Even I wouldn't write something this graphic, but I might...if I ever get the nerve. LOL
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on January 03, 2006
    Really good fic. One problem I had with it was you using the wrong word. You said 'except' when you should have put 'accept' and I can't remember the other one right now. The lemon was really good, but I had two problems with it. The first one is that you said twice that Naruto 'went' to get the lube. Generally, you don't need to 'go' to get something off of your nightstand when you're on the bed. Lube is also normally kept near the bed anyway. My second problem is that you said Sasuke had 'folds'. That's something that I only associate with girls. It was an excellent fic regardless of the mistakes though, and a hot lemon. I'm going to keep a look-out for your fics from now on. I also think it would have been better as a multi-chapter fic, but it was still a good one-shot. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Myo on December 31, 2005
    Hoooottt!! But there's errors... You may wanna check spelling and grammar (it would be easier to read then). But othserwise nice x) I luv NaruSasu action!!
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  • From ANON - Gigi1o1 on December 30, 2005
    PLEASE WRITE MORE!PLEASE DONT MAKE THIS A ONE SHOT!!!!
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on December 30, 2005
    I also forgot to add something. (guess I got too carried away...) No offence but the grammar...was almost the death of me 8X Sorry, I guess it's a pet peeve of mine and I'm a Grammar Queen (but I suck at spelling, so go figure.) despite my name, Stupidity Unleashed. Any-who, I just wanted to make sure you knew where to improve. No hard feelings, right?
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on December 30, 2005
    Wow. I should start taking piano lessons XP Lol. Nice fic. I truely enjoyed it^^
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  • From ANON - Kenz on December 30, 2005
    It was good, two problems though...
    One a few grammar errors or so it seemed to me
    but hey what do I know I dotn write story I just read and
    two you could have made it longer and drawn it out.
    Personally I tihnk it would have seem better if you had made it longer
    then making run all together....if you understand what I mean...
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  • From chinohana on December 30, 2005
    x.x i nearly died... wow, all this after a piano lesson? interesting... *looks real intensly as to absorb*
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